Reviews for The Incredibles: Broken Hearts |
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Guest chapter 6 . 2/13 Add one more chapter chapter 8 |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/24 Add a new chapter chapter 6 finding dash |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/17 Broken hearts chapter 6 |
Rashad curry chapter 1 . 1/16 Add a new chapter |
Incrediblesfan1 chapter 4 . 1/1 Hey, UltimateDisneyInfinityFan. It's Incrediblesfan1. Hopefully you're enjoying the start of the new year. Listen, I have a suggestion for your next chapter: After Violet finds Dash, Dash starts to get scared of Violet, fearing that she's gonna yell at him again. He starts screaming for help, only for Violet to put a forcefield around herself and her brother and get them to safety. However, a certain enemy has plans... and they are not pretty! Please take this suggestion into mind when you can, and don't forget to update! ~Incrediblesfan1 |
Rashad curry chapter 4 . 12/31/2019 Add a new chapter chapter 5 |
Guest chapter 4 . 12/31/2019 Make a new chapter chapter 5 |
Guest chapter 3 . 12/30/2019 Add a new chapter chapter 4 |
Guest chapter 3 . 12/29/2019 Broken hearts chapter 4 |
Guest chapter 3 . 12/29/2019 The incredibles broken hearts chapter 4 |
Guest chapter 3 . 12/29/2019 Add a new chapter |
Incrediblesfan1 chapter 3 . 5/7/2019 Hey, UltimateDisneyInfinityFan. Loving your work as always. Keep up the good work. Anyways, to the point at hand: When do you plan on getting back to work with this story? Cause some of us readers are really dying to know what happens next! Also, I feel like that Frozone and Edna don't get enough love like they should sometimes. So I was thinking maybe do a story on Frozone spending some time with Dash and Violet, or Edna spending some time with Jack-Jack. Please update when you can. ~Incrediblesfan1 |
LiamGamerKid chapter 2 . 2/19/2019 This reminds me of the Spongebob episode "Whatever happened to Spongebob?! (Whobob Whatpants)". |
Incrediblesfan1 chapter 2 . 2/19/2019 Oh, my Goodness! What an intense chapter. Man, Violet, I hope you find Dash and make things right with him before it's too late! UltimateDisneyInfinityFan, as Robert De Niro would tell Billy Crystal, "You're good, you. You've got a gift!" You have a gift. Big time! Really, really! Keep up the good work as always. ~Incrediblesfan1 |