Your Feedback/Grading for Assignment #3

Examiner: Lizzy

Grade: 20/20 - O (Outstanding)

Feedback: "You have a good grasp on Petunia's character and I absolutely adore how you wrote her, despite breaking my heart. I loved seeing this caring, regretful side of her, even if she couldn't express it. I often see Petunia written as completely evil or a meek housewife, so it was refreshing to see her here with mixed feelings on Harry and what she was doing to him. Pacing was good, transitions between scenes were effortless and didn't break the flow. Dialogue felt realistic and in-character. I think the prompt was used successfully, showing kind of a series of unfortunate punishments Harry had to endure and keeping the theme running through the whole fic. It was a clever plot, and I really felt for Petunia, making bad choices for the right reasons. And for Harry, of course. I need to find a dozen happy Petunia fics now to heal from this sadness. But it was very good and I love it. Perfect spag, and all extra criteria met. :)"