Reviews for Mutation
Mibani chapter 7 . 3/9/2011
5 fucking years!

Mother 3 was traslated already :3
stripess chapter 1 . 4/10/2008
Nice. I look forward to reading more, if you continue this.
darkangel3456 chapter 7 . 10/31/2006
THANK YOU FOR UPDATING!

yay a puppy!

I love all the characters you've created and given a personality to that had very little character developement in the game.
James chapter 5 . 4/14/2006
A very well-written chapter (particularly your accompanying narrative) with quite an interesting take on Ness and Paula's family life.
DragonRaiderX9 chapter 4 . 12/3/2005
I should yell at you for not updating, but I have no room to talk. Just don't do it again. Oh, and if you ever talk to one of my former fans, please tell them not to hate me.
James5 chapter 4 . 12/3/2005
I thought the last scene between father and son in Chapter 3 was touching, and I liked the moments with Dr. Andonuts and the guys later on. Very nicely written in general.
SaturnStorm chapter 4 . 12/2/2005
Short, but worth it.

However... speech-marks are all replaced with odd i's that make it a little harder to read. Just thought I'd point that out.

Can't wait to see more! _
Clanker chapter 3 . 9/29/2004
Is there going to be any more? It would be really good if there was, cause I'm enjoying this
abcdefghifjklmnopqrstuvwxyz chapter 3 . 4/3/2004
Pretty cool. Keep on writing!
SaturnStorm chapter 3 . 3/23/2004
*breathe* What's in that bland brown building? What did little Jeffery see?... Did he REALLY forget?
PLEASE continue! I will accept the long wait (drove me mad last year when there was a third chapter but it was only an Author's note - I could have cried), if there is more! _ I can't wait to see where this goes!
tanya-crest chapter 3 . 3/10/2004
that was lovely... uh huh... bit short if you asked me...
tanya-crest chapter 2 . 3/10/2004
hate curious kids! simply hate them!
tanya-crest chapter 1 . 3/10/2004
it's good... believable.
John McKeenan chapter 3 . 3/1/2004
*A "CYCLE" SPOILER FOLLOWS*
IT'S ABOUT FRICKIN' TIME!
Although...I'm not one to speak on getting new chapters out in time. ::kicks self::
I've forgotten how incredible this story is. It's intense, involving, mysterious; to sum up, wonderful. And considering that you had no problem knocking off Jeff in Cycle, there's no way to tell what's going to come of all this. I know considering your skill, I'm going to be hit hard by whatever happens.
Here's some more adjectives to chew on. Twisted, intriguing, and wicked scary. This is another classic in the works.
SaturnStorm chapter 3 . 2/18/2004
Heyy... will this be continuing? I want to jump-start my little story 'Unusual Species', and I can't do that without some form of inspiration. After the excitement and imagination caused by Cycle, and the curiosity caused by the beginning of this great story... it'd be nice to see more of this appear sometime soon...
Hope your access comes back soon.
~~SaturnStorm
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