Though it feels pretty short and simple, this does feel a lot like an actual episode of King of the Hill, or at least a scene from one. The conservative tone of the show carrying over to this story is kind of a double-edged sword to me, however. That, combined with the story's word count being less than 250, makes it feel pretty unmemorable; especially at the ending. Everything turning back to normal as if it never happened makes it feel apathetic and forgettable.

Hey man, love the story. However I felt it lacked length as well as romantic components. Perhaps Peggy and John Redcorn should bang in the next part? Idk your the artist, not me.

I would've thrown a tomato at him!