Ok the dialog in the first chapters was a little messy but as I read it gets better. I love the last chapter. I honestly think Ahsoka may have gone with Andkin though. Like she left the order around this time. I mean I know there was a catalist for that, but this is a bit of a catalist as well.

Umm, where did you get the idea that Padme didn't know she was having twins? As far as I can tell, canon only says that Obi-Wan and Anakin/Vader were surprised that she had twins. Obi-Wan had no reason to even know she was pregnant until after Order 66 and Anakin started obsessing over how to save her the night he found out she was pregnant in the first place.

Thanks for the new chapter! Glad to so l see you're doing well enough to write! Hope things are good:)

aw crap here we go. hopefully this will play out differently. but anyway, yes! update! HAPPY DANCE!

This is an interesting story so far and I’m curious to see where you take it. Fixit stories can be some of the best ones and I’m glad you decided to write this one.

So cool please continue

I'm so proud of you for realizing your situation and getting yourself out. You are so strong.

I really like how you wrote Ahsoka here. Just the right balance of helping out without being too much, because her character can very easily become too much.

Well, we know what happened to that woman with the pet dragons and her anti-slavery campaign, recently, dont we?

I can just see Anakin taking a similar stance.

Let the GFFA burn.

Hey thanks for posting this chapter! It was a real fun surprise to see the notification! Hope you get your situation sorted out, and have a good one!

This is really good. I love reading the interactions, they are well written and believable.

Don't know what I should say other than keep it up and great job

I'm enjoying this. You have Anakin spot on here. Doing the right thing with no idea what to do next.

Obsession sounds a bit negative, it should be eternal and undying DEVOTION to The Lord of the Rings, because its the best thing ever.

ooh this is an interesting fic, I'm very excited to see where it goes! it always bothered me that Anakin seemed okay with how the clones where treated something like this is far more believable to me. Also I adore the effort you are putting into this fic. I'm sure it's time consuming but it makes it so much better in my opinion, all the little tidbits are so great!

Thank you for sharing this fic with us! looking forward to reading more!

Ye to my knowledge reconditioning is what you think it was, but throw in antouch or legit brainwashing and, ahem, disposal of clones who don’t take to all the mind fuckery very well. Hate to say it, but as bad as you thought it was I’m pretty sure it’s worse