| Reviews for The Girl in Black |
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  Guest chapter 57 . 7/30 Yay! Lita has returned home! And yeah, I know what you mean about her character arc. Sometimes you have to write heartbreaking things to really shape a character. I've surprised myself at the twists of fate I sometimes write for my characters! Undercooked pasta is truly the worst thing they could do to Paulo. It gets stuck in your molars and just feels nasty. Gotta love 5.0.5. |
 Natalie Jarrett chapter 57 . 7/30 Will you write a lemon next? I know you write small stuff but what about a full on lemon? Huh huh? |
| Kuchia-chi chapter 57 . 7/29 Sweet revenge is on the horizon and I am so excited! I'm looking forward to seeing Flug and Demencia go full sadistic while transporting Paulo to the manor. I feel so bad for Lita and how badly her assault has effected her but I'm looking forward to seeing her recover and building herself up again. I live for Black Hat being evil in secret. Although I love him being an absolute sweetheart with Lita, I hope he never gives up being evil and sadistic. |
| RandomGirl313 chapter 57 . 7/29 AAAHHHHHH I wanna watch them deal with that son of abastard! plz update sooner pplllllzzzzzz |
| Starlord Master chapter 57 . 7/29 It’s time for revenge! Dementia must be a fan of Naruto. At least Lita is safe now. These guys really are like a family. |
| PhantomDragon99 chapter 57 . 7/29 Yes! He's getting his just rewards! |
| Guest chapter 56 . 7/23 Donna is too pure for Hat Island. What a sweetie-pie! I can't believe we're almost to the end! I've been reading since November or so... it'll be hard saying goodbye to this fic, but I guess I'll just move on to Let's Fall in Love. ;) |
| Emilybluedimond chapter 56 . 7/24 Please update soon love this story so much |
| Emeraldshard chapter 56 . 7/24 Yes! |
| RandomGirl313 chapter 56 . 7/23 plz don't leave us hanging again, we need more Black Hat and Lita. They've been apart for too long! |
| Kuchia-chi chapter 56 . 7/23 Ah~ Black Hat's making me swoon! They're almost back together! I can't wait to see what they do about the whole situation. They're so cute! I really appreciated that White-Eye saw the greater benefit in her foster brothers staying alive than her mission to hunt down Black Hat. I'm with Lita on beating Paulo to death with a chair leg. Thank you so much for the hard work! |
| YanaW chapter 56 . 7/23 I’m thrilled finally he shows up that cliffhanger hurts me but can’t wait what happens next. Extremely worried about White-Eye and her plans. But whooo I feel Paulo will be in deeeppp trouble |
| Starlord Master chapter 56 . 7/23 Donna sure is understanding. Black Hat just loves making dramatic entrances. |
| PizzaCraz chapter 45 . 7/20 Knowing where the blade is and knowing that Lita knows. Oh shit, the tension is building! |
| PizzaCraz chapter 44 . 7/20 Dementia just had to know. lmfao Oh, I love that BH’s subordinates are now giving him hell for hurting Lita. Go Flug! Go Dementia! |
