Reviews for Between Dreams and Reality
Guest chapter 15 . 1/18
It's funny
Mcginn112 chapter 15 . 12/8/2019
Oh please continue. This is absolute welcome between seasons.
Renzo7 chapter 14 . 11/22/2019
I guess this is the one you were anxious about :P. I'll try to share my opinion in a friendly way. Please keep a friendly "tone" in mind while reading it, but feel free to skip it if you're not interested in reading why I didn't like it and what I'd suggest.

I didn't like this chapter. Sex between males isn't something I'm interested in, so I tried to skip as much of it as possible as I looked for the end of that scene. I'd be grateful if warnings and end-of-scene markers were included for this kind of scenes because it's not advertised as a homosexual smut story, but it's your story and you should write it as you see fit.

I'm here to read about Chloe and Lucifer. Hopefully that's what I'll find in the future here, assuming Chloe will still be interested in being with Lucifer.

I hope you have a great weekend!
Renzo7 chapter 13 . 11/22/2019
Too domestic? LOL. That was hilarious.

Great chapter. I like the way the tension has grown and is finally been resolved. It's definitely been worth the wait.

Chloe has turned out to be an extremely sexy and provocative participant! Most fanfics I've read have her as a very nervous, intimidated, and uncertain participant; I love what you've done with her.
Renzo7 chapter 12 . 11/21/2019
I wasn't expecting the wings dare! That was creative and devious on Chloe's part. I'm hoping she won't attribute it to hallucinations or drunkenness tomorrow, though I figure that's what's most likely to happen.

Great ending to the playful night. I've really liked this.
Renzo7 chapter 11 . 11/21/2019
So many ideas and so much fun! Lucifer's wardrobe is definitely taking a hit. Poor guy!

The tension at the piano is beautiful. I can't decide if I want it to keep building or see Chloe's resolve crumble, though I'm leaning towards the latter.
Renzo7 chapter 10 . 11/20/2019
That was deliciously hot! That experience must be incredibly exciting.
Renzo7 chapter 9 . 11/20/2019
Overall this was good, but Lucifer is all about free will and consent, so the rear seat scene felt out of character for him.

Taking her vibratory was hilarious. I look forward to the next scene.
Renzo7 chapter 8 . 11/20/2019
That was super hot! A bit weird with the interrogation mixed in there, but hopefully all cases will come to a close, pun intended.
Renzo7 chapter 7 . 11/20/2019
I liked this one, too. Considering how the movie scene played out, it appears that this one was real and not a dream. Good behavior from Lucifer.
Renzo7 chapter 3 . 11/20/2019
That was incredibly hot! You have an amazing talent for these scenes.
Renzo7 chapter 2 . 11/20/2019
This has been super fun so far! I'm really looking forward to the rest of the story.
Smile-Evily chapter 15 . 10/22/2019
I adore this story! I the detailed scenarios between Lucifer and Chloe! I love the passionate playfulness that they have between them.
This is forsure in my favorite story list!
Guest chapter 15 . 8/30/2019
Sorry. I read everything before reviewing. I could not put it down. So freakin hot! I loved the whole game night sequence. The sexual tension could be cut with a chainsaw! You wrote it beautifully. Can't wait to read more!
Guest chapter 15 . 8/11/2019
Cool
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