Oh, I like this Octavian better.

My guy when are you gonna update

Roman Percy seems a bit more stupid and oblivious than canon Percy. Even he would think about the consequences of bringing Pizza to his location.

I love best bro Octavian.

Uhm... what? He's born in 1993, its 2005... how do they have a switch and breath of the wild, when said creations aren't made for about another decade?

And I now feel Alex has potential as the ship.

Well wait a minute. Those two dogs, Aurum and Argentum, were gifts to Reyna from her mother...?

Ah, so Chiron was scouting him already. His disappearance is gonna get him quite weary.

So first of all, gotta say, this feels like Rick's style of writing and I fucking love it.

Huh, so Octavian isn’t a little prick in this.
Weird, I’ve already gotten so used to hating him. This will be a roller coaster of a fic. Keep up the good work.

I expected a Marcus betrayl, but Jesus that was an amazing way to do it. I was not at all expecting him to just try and take over like that that was damn good

Damn it. This chapter never fails to give the goosebumps. The first time I was like you are just extending the scene, cmmon, he will get a hit. Move on to gladiator fight. I didn't have even a sliver of doubt that Percy wouldn't be able to win the race. It was this chapter which hooked me to your writing. Like yeah this guy's crazy, he will do everything you expect and yet none of it. I have told you many times but yet again. Never change and keep it up.

Wow. I almost forgot what made me fall in love with your work. Similar to Luke and Percy in Lightning Thief, but better. You have a clear idea of what you are doing. Not half bad at it huh.

Honestly dude Percy should’ve been mentored by Julius.

I really liked this whole story with all of its twist. Keep up the good work.