Really great story!

I loved this whole story from beginning to end! You have a wonderful writing style. Thank you for sharing this! I’m very much looking forward to reading your other works.

This was a fun story to read! I recently re-watched Labyrinth and went on another Sarah/Jareth kick and was surprised to see this story so recently written! Usually I find them back a few years, so that was a delightful surprise. It was really well-written and Jareth was more OC than most authors on here make him - for some reason, he gets turned into a sappy lovesick puppy that drives me up the wall. It's nice to see Sarah retains most of her sass, as well. My only complaint is the random smut scene after Sarah tells him she loves him. Maybe it's me struggling with cliches, but it felt somewhat awkwardly transitioned and seemed mildly unnecessary given that was their first meeting after not seeing each other for some time.

this is a new favorite of mine. the plot felt so natural in its narrative flow and development and the author does a great job portraying the characters. the mature sections were a really good blend of being steamy and detailed but not so in depth that it was a distraction from the story. so glad i found this gem

Honey... all that was missing was the sweaty hand slapping the fogged glass to mark the occasion...as there was no glass to be found in the scene...all that is left to say is...wow...great scene.

I'm sorry you had a hater. I found this story very fun to read and appreciate you writing it. Thank you!

Is this story done and if so why is the word complete not on this story?

Phew, is it hot in here, or is it just me? *fans self* Really enjoying these chapters, and awaiting the next installment :) Can't wait to see what happens next.

Not too steamy...perfectly done.

To było naturalistyczne i w sam raz, dzięki że Jareth jest tu tak ludzki, mają oboje swoje wahania i sprzeczności i są jak bardzo człowiecza para ze eszystkimi wzlotami i upadkami związku, bardzo mi się to podoba. Pisz czekam

What’s a “heedy expression”?

Great start. But if she put the squash back down on the table, why is the Amish farmer yelling at her to return the unpaid-for veggie?

Ooer what's going on here then? Perhaps the thing that the Labyrinth is preoccupied with?

Oh My God! You cannot just leave us with a huge cliffhanger...Please update soon. Love the story and your writing is great.

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