Are you gonna do the other regions like sinnoh and Kalos. If you do please for the love of god fix the unova region because it was the worst seasons ever, they made ash so dumb and incompetent also they made him forget everything when he had experience all over the other regions. I change my mind on mega Sceptile, give ash a mega Lucario cause that would be badass. When you write the movie events I think you should make it into another fanfic so if people decide to skip ahead they will get confused and will have to read all of the story.

Great chapter and hope you update soon. I have a question, are you gonna give ash a mega Sceptile because that would be badass and wally a mega Gallade? I hope you make a arc about mega evolutions.

Hi! Sorry I didn’t get the chance to review until now but I’m so thankful that you wrote something like this! I feel the anime was missing Wally (I really wish it included more elements from the game)! I was so happy seeing him in this when I first read through! You did a great job with this story and I would love to read more stories with ash and May soon! :)

I know you're busy on this story I really do love this story definitely one of the best I seen in a while but is it possible to do a two shot story where the main paring is ash x korrina have it based on the episode where korrina and ash reunite with each other except with differences and ash isn't dense he's more mature understands what his feelings are towards korrina and smarter than the anime version and has plenty of shalour shipping moments which is the name of the shipping for ash x korrina incase u were wondering after seeing korrina return I feel they deserve a story where they have their reunion and get together officially especially since it is rare seeing those two together don't see them to often and another reason in both Pokemon xyz series and in Pokemon journeys episode 25 or 26 I noticed ash and korrina developed a bit of a crush on each other and during their reunion from what I've seen it seems like it grew more just like the old saying distance makes the heart grow fonder u don't have to do this kind of story if u don't want to I'm just saying it be great seeing ash x korrina story especially after the reunion episode they had plus if u look at korrina and may they do share something's in common that they share with ash that makes them a perfect match for ash I know there different people but they do share similarities just wanted to share this idea with u that's all and to help add another story to your collection

Awesome chapter as always and keep up the good work I look forward to seeing the chapters where the lucario and the mystery of mew Pokemon Ranger and the temple of the sea starts those two are one of my favorite Pokemon movies I seen I'm curious what chapter can we expect them to start and which of the two u plan to do first

Drew sometimes gets on my nerves to sometimes especially his attitude towards may I never really liked him to begin with and never will but don't hate him either also I noticed ash has helped may during their journey but not as often as he should have I think those two need to be involved a little more often so not only she can become a stronger trainer but also grow as a person and ash can teach her some of the strategies he came up with in the past and teach it to her and she can make the improvements on them for example dawn showed the spining technique she first showed when she used it on that areodactyl during the dimand and pearl series but ash helped make it even better by making it an offense and defense combination so what I'm getting at is what if during one of ashs battles he came up with the idea that dawn came up with at that time may notices it and gets an idea of coming up with a new move that she can use for the contests and makes the improvements on that move which is where the counter shield is born and when ash sees her do it it gives him the motivation to try it out and make his own version of it we seen dawn and ash do it if they can make it together so can ash and may they ca create their own unique movesets for Pokemon contests and gym battles together as a team and doing this can help not just bring them closer as friends and spend more time together alone but help their bond friendship and the feelings they both share grow think of it as private training session where it's just them and no one else because they really haven't spend that much time alone together so they decided to have a day to themselves and when they finish training they can relax have fun and even open up to each other more and learn more about each other that they didn't know about and even give each other hints of their love for each other by instinctly saying something that make them blush and there hearts beat faster and as a starting point they can both just kiss each other on the cheek but still aren't completely sure about their feelings but they start getting a better understanding of where their feelings for each other are at right now that's just my idea I know it's not perfect but as usual just wanted to help that's all I look forward to the next chapter when it arrives have a great day

Great job as always enjoyed the chapter and I'm curious do u plan to do the other Pokemon movies in this story like jirachi wish maker but with more advance shipping moments between ash and may and unlike the movie where she folds her wish maker on each of the seven days but forgets it on the final day but in your version of the movie she manages to fold all of them and her wish about being with ash will come true even though she won't realize it till the time is right or even Pokemon Ranger and the temple of the sea and have more advance shipping moments and the one big difference here that should be added is where ash and may save the temple together instead of her being left in the pod that that ash put her in and the temple makes them king and queen of the sea Temple for saving it since it would seem them worthy for their heroics and make more sense to since manaphy is the prince of the sea and he sees them ash and may as his mother and father and Pikachu as his older brother picturing them together is like ash and may being married raising their first child and are a family in my opinion manaphy plays a role in advance shipping that just brings them closer as a couple in my opinion and not sure if u plan to do this movie in your story which would be destiny deoxys the movie

Another good chapter, no real criticism other than I wish the chapters were longer. I’m probably going to make an account soon so my reviews will no longer be a guest account. Keep up the good work!

This is the most amazing story I read so far even though I said this more than once but it's definitely a fantastic story u made here I look forward to the content u put in the story plus your writing definitely has improved alot since u first started I noticed the story getting better and better as it progresses also I had a thought for a possible one shot or a small story can you do a ash x koharu story because it's new and haven't been done before I know we don't understand alot about her and don't see much of her but I know there's a way to work with on what we do know plus since ash is a very experienced trainer and knows alot about Pokemon he can help train and teach her everything he knows remember koharu is like may and Lille she doesn't like Pokemon very much other than that one electric gen 8 Pokemon and is smart in her own way like Lille is and can learn to like Pokemon just like how he helped may with that as for the region they go to my suggestion go with the series and regions your most familiar with and keep her in character please it's just a thought I came up and possible story u could add to your library of stories u have I know it's too soon to say but I just had to say my idea before I forgot I know it's not perfect but seeing a ash x koharu story would be great because that paring has never been done before and it's extremely rare to since no one really considered making that yet choice is up to u if u want to try it I just want to help give ideas for a future story

I know it's far in the future but don't pair dawn with Wally lol

Great chapter! You can definitely tell your writing has improved over the course of the story. Eagerly await your next chapter.

It gets me excited to read this story everytime it gets updated also seeing ash and korrina reunite with each other in the upcoming episodes this month has me excited if they have korrina return to the anime it gives me hope we will see other old friends and rivals of ash return to the anime again also after seeing korrina again it makes me want to see ash x korrina story because korrina is one of my favorite characters from xy series plus she's alot like ash and may is I saw the similarities between her ash and may there not to different from each other another thing instead of dawn being paired with Wally have it be vierty since she's from sinnoh and traveled from sinnoh to Kanto and she's already a experinced Pokemon Trainer and it is a paring that hasn't been done before plus when I picture them together I think they go a little better together then dawn would that's just my opinion and do you plan to have ash capture a dragonite or a riolu since ash has those in gen 8 anime the way I can see him get riolu is from when the events from Pokemon lucario and the mystery of mew happen like always lucario dosent exactly trust ash for obvious reasons but at the end they become friends and even though he sacrificed himself to save the tree of beginning lucario himself may have joined sir Aron in the after life but not before giving ash one last gift he uses the power of aura he had left to give ash a riolu egg which is sir Aron's lucario being reborn this is how I can see how ash can get riolu and he will do everything in his power to take good care of riolu in honor of lucario and also practices to develop his aura abilities after the events that happened that can help ash grow learn and mature as a person I know may will also start falling more in love with ash to if u do lucario and the mystery of mew can you please have may and ash together please seeing those two not be able to dance together in the movie was disappointing that can help push may and ash even closer together when ash asks her to dance with him and more advance shipping moments between ash and may

Awesome chapter as usual and great seeing ash win the gym battle against Flannery I noticed one of the reviewers suggested that Wally gets paired up with Dawn it's an interesting idea but she hasn't became a trainer yet let alone started traveling after giving it some thought I did come up with someone who can be paired with wallly that is vierty (from Pokemon I choose you movie) because she already started traveling and she traveled with ash and sorrel not sure how his name is spelled but he wants to be a Pokemon professor that's why he's trying to learn as much as possible the reason I choose her because even though she's from sinnoh and has a piplulp as her starter she started traveling in Kanto with ash and at the end of the movie they went there separate ways since she planned to go to a different region next I think it was johto not sure but bottom line is ash can have a reunion with vierty since they do know each other she can travel with them for a while and she and Wally can get to know each other better and be paired up together since it's never been done before vierty x wally instead of dawn have it be Wally because she's already a more experienced traveler and trainer during the time ash is in hoenn region and she's already out exploring regions it makes more sense that way if u think about it

I seen the new trailer for the upcoming episodes in Pokemon gen 8 what suprised me is seeing the return of korrina definitely one of my favorite gym leaders other than may I ship her with ash to it's rare seeing her and ash paired up together in there own story to be honest I wouldn't mind seeing a story where it features ash and korrina as a couple in my honest opinion since it's extremely rare seeing anyone making a story featuring them and after seeing riolu and ash have to take care of the egg I think his chances of finally getting lucario is very high now if that happens it will definitely be very exciting to see and with lucario involved we might even see ash with his aura powers again like in lucario and the mystery of mew movie or during that two parter episode in Pokemon diamond and Pearl where ash dawn and Brock tried to go rescue riolu from hunter j and her men and it took ashs aura abilities to pin point there location where riolu was being held captive it sort of like how ash and greninja can see and feel what the other dose something like that I can see alot of great things in gen 8 anime happen that we wouldn't expect especially the return of other old characters just like with korrina I'm just excited to see more of this especially when it features old returning characters we haven't seen in a very long time

I wasn't expecting Brandon to appear in this story glad to see him involved and it's not often we see ash may and Brandon in the same story great job and keep up the good work and since this started I have really been enjoying its awesome I look forward to the next chapter chapter keep up the good work