bro this was sooo good i love it also i love the fact that u are still alive and active in this website

Why are you playing the pronoun game with Annabeth, I wouldn't know who it was if I hadn't read all the books plus a LOT of fan fics.

Yes, any teenage boy who got power over air would absolutely use it to fly like Superman.

Why would Hera be a candidate to join him on the quest? What happened there?

I read the Princess Bride reference in Inigo's voice, even before I got to the part where you said where it was from.

I am so glad to share least favorite Olympian with Percy. APHRODITE IS THE WORST.

THE BEST PERTEMIS STORY I HAVE EVER READ! THANK YOU FOR THIS. MOST OF THEM WERE TOO BORING OR THEY WERE DISCONTINUED AFTER 2 CHAPTERS BUT THIS IS BEYOND EXCELLENT. I STARTED THIS STORY WITH LOW EXPECTATIONS THAT ITS FINISHED BUT I CAN SAY THAT THIS IS THA BEST. FAVOURTE WRITER, CHECK!

i loved it a perfect start to a percy and artimiss love story, like every love story you need to heal the pain withe someone.

This is a nice story but there are a couple of plot holes and a few questions that I feel are unanswered.

For the plot holes: if Percy is the 2 time saviour of Olympus then surly Iaptus had been washed through the lethe at that was part of the original PJO series, and if that's the case then Bob should exist or Iaptus would at least be kind to Percy as they are friends; Also how are the Titans unified on earth in a fortified base on Orthys? The gods would never allow this and definitely not with Titans that had opposed them during the Second Titan War (Titans like Hyperion etc).
I would suggest recapping and purhaps rewriting this story so it fits into the world it claims to be apart of.

For the unanswered questions I have: when Percy and Artemis got married did Percy become immortal/a god or did he just keep his partial immortality? If he was immortal does that mean their daughters were also immortal as well or were they demigods? If they were immortal and by extension gods along with Artemis and Percy what were their's and Percy's domains?

I think that's all my questions, if I think of any more I'll add them as a PM

Loved this story, good work.

Will read more from you :D

Amazing story! just a quick question... where did chapter 22 and 25 go...

Loved This!

Lol, this chapter is funny.

Hey this is the first time I read your story and I just wanna thank you for writing such a great story:) it was really fun and heartwarming to read, thanks!

hekate is the godess of the mist... iris is a godess of rainbows