what a copout non committal ending.

good story

Aw boo I wanted them together

Thank you for your work!

A fitting end if I’ve ever seen one. A crush that ends with both admiration and with genuine love that doesn’t have to be romantic. The story being from Weiss’s point of view made it very interesting and I’m glad I’ve stuck through with this from the beginning to the end. Now I ‘demand’ you do one for both Yang and one for Ruby because you can never have enough Dragonslayer or Lancaster.

Ok going to be honest, not the result I was expecting; but it makes sense. My boy Jaune is currently reluctant to return Ice Queen jr’s affections because of what happened to Pyrrha, which is what would’ve happened in canon as well. But still well reasoned.

Okay so I misread the beginning of chapter 9, so thats my bad. Correcting it for myself got rid of my problem with the chapter, so even better job!

Quite a good chapter, I didnt notice any eye popping mistakes, and it flowed quite well. The only issue I had is that it feels like it moved from morning at the table to Jaune and Ruby away from the group a bit too quickly, but taking too long could have also been a problem. So good job!

really like the story. Keep it up!

Keep it up! I've been enjoying every night I get to read your work!

I think this story has been pretty neat so far

If i came off as rude or negative, I apologize. Your story is good no matter what, and I wanted to give advice to see it possibly grow better. But, given your reasoning, I can understand why that may be difficult. And thats fair. You get better with each chapter, and succeed with an idea that ive seen fail many times. Continue your good work, and ill be looking forward to the next chapter.

I Quite enjoy this fic, I believe you underestimate yourself and do quite well at conveying affection. I had any complaints it would be the length but that's only because I want more. Don't believe you need to schedule this is a hobby after all and you have no obligation to set a schedule since you don't make money from this. The argument that you won't get followers because of that is stupid as you follow to be informed when something will upload.

Your a much better writer then me (Then again I only do Shit Harem Fics Lol) And I look forward to your next upload.

I wanted to read this, the summary sounded pretty good, but then I got to the first page and I couldn't read it. The paragraph structure is rough, like an old English 101 term draft, you've got grammar jumping all around the room, and spelling looks like you forgot about a spell checker or a proofreader.
I appreciate you trying to put multiple stories up on the site, and get either your ideas and/or your name out there, but you've got to think about what is getting uploaded.
Don't tarnish your name right off the get go.

I like it a lot. Regardless of you believe it or not, I think you have a real talent for romantic tension situations and monologues. The "will they won't they" feelings is thrilling. I eagerly await all future chapters.