Reviews for RWBY 1,0: You Can (Not) Return
IcyStream chapter 7 . 3/12
I love this.
Guest chapter 7 . 3/1
These chapter are awesome, please continue this story. But i have a question if Shinji was transported to remnant by being inside the 12th angel dose that mean unit 04 or the facility it was in is in Remnant as well if so Shinji could find it and maybe try to pilot it as we don't know much about what happened unit 04 after it disappeared
zack24 chapter 7 . 1/14
what color will Shini's aura be and what will its semblance be?
willcraftNEX chapter 7 . 3/17/2019
hoping for arkos, just saying.
Ant244815 chapter 7 . 3/11/2019
Is his weapon a giant biomechanic mech?
VentXekart chapter 7 . 2/28/2019
I'm glad you're aware of some of the spelling and grammar errors, in fact I spotted a few in this chapter (not to be a nag or condescending but I just wanted to point that out just in case you didn't notice). Also, I'm glad that you chose one of the pairings in this story to be Ruby X Shinji rather than Asuka X Shinji. I'm not trying to bash people who support that pairing but I personally dislike it because throughout NGE Asuka treated Shinji like a punching bag and her attitude as well as her personality rubs me the wrong way to be honest, especially considering that Shinji has some psychological issues of his own that he has throughout the series. However, I'm hoping that Ruby will help Shinji through them all and I am curious to see how their relationship will evolve.

With that out of the way though, I'm extremely curious as to what weapon he'll be wielding in this story and how skilled he will be in terms of being a hunter especially considering that not only does he have two days to prepare for it but he also was pretty apprehensive about fighting monsters again considering what he had to go through with the angels.

Speaking of the angels, I'm curious to see what will happen after Bardiel is eliminated, since afterwards Unit-01 rejects the Dummy Plug from the battle with Zeruel and beyond which would mean that NERV would be scrambling to find a new pilot and/or attempting to try and retrieve Shinji despite the fact he's already occupied with the happenings on Remnant. I'm also curious to see how his disappearance will affect Rei, Asuka, and their group of friends. So far I can conclude from the previous chapter that Touji and Kensuke aren't buying Rei and Asuka's cover stories which may lead to them discovering the truth sooner rather than later.

I look forward to seeing future chapters of this story and don't worry
willcraftNEX chapter 6 . 2/25/2019
prying that this is not a dead fic and will still be updated...
VentXekart chapter 6 . 2/22/2019
Okay, first off I'd like to point out that there are some spelling and grammar errors in each chapter that need to be corrected at some point in the future but they don't impact the story in terms of legibility.

Now I'm already following two other Evangelion/RWBY crossovers one of which in particular has the girls of RWBY (as well as a few other characters) ending up and influencing some of the events in the Evangelion Universe so seeing a story with an inverted version of that concept is interesting. While you've already mentioned that his semblance will have something to do with Unit-01 I am curious as to whether or not his aura will be unlocked before his initiation as well as what type of weapon he'll be wielding as well considering that the only weapons he's ever used were wielded by Unit-01. Another thing that caught my attention in one of the chapters is the fact that the Grimm instinctively went towards him while ignoring the rest of team RWBY. Does this mean that Salem is aware of his existence as well as the fact that he is from another realm? If so, I'm curious to see how the events of RWBY and Evangelion are affected by that.

In terms of pairings, I'm curious as to where you're going to go with them. You've already mentioned a potential 'Shinji X Ruby' pairing in this story but have you considered other characters to pair him up with? I saw one review asking if Blake could potentially be paired up with him which might not be a bad suggestion because they both fear emotional pain and they tend to be fairly distant from other people. Another character that I would personally like to suggest him being paired up with is Velvet Scarlatina because to be honest they both have a tendency to be timid or meek plus to be honest while I've read at least one incomplete story where he would've been in a love triangle with Blake and Yang I've yet to read a Evangelion/RWBY crossover where he was paired up with Velvet.

Regardless of what I've mentioned above, I look forward to reading the next chapter.
willcraftNEX chapter 5 . 2/6/2019
the beginning of something beautiful... and badass

BTW, who's he being shipped with?
Earthly Entity chapter 5 . 2/4/2019
Will his Eva appear later in the story and will his aura or semblence be related to his Eva or will it be something else.
Darkscythe Drake chapter 5 . 2/3/2019
Nice chapter. In regards to the pairing (sorry if I seem annoying) could you do Shinji x Ruby? It's just that there are already a ton of SxA fanfics and a little originality might be nice.
artifactBC chapter 2 . 2/3/2019
I love Misato x Shinji pairing.
ptl chapter 3 . 1/27/2019
Why I’m not surprised that the Grimm were attracted to the boy with tons of psychological problems?
ptl chapter 1 . 1/27/2019
Gambol Shroud only has a single pistol, not two.
AsouShibata chapter 3 . 1/27/2019
You have a promising story.
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