Loved your story. I was sad it was so short!

I'm sorry I'm shouting, but THIS STORY IS MY FAVOURITE NOW!

Well done, thank you!

Thought maybe this fic would be a little better. Obviously not, as everyone still paints the idiot zuko and perfect katara

Omg, this is such an amazing story! Sotender and real!
You brought a further depth to Zuko's past an created such sweet moments between him and the other characters. Well done!

This was brilliant and I loved it. Thank you.

This is poetry. thank you so much for it!

Hi I really need more of this thanks.
probably one of the best written zutara fics I've come by and I really wish there were more writers like you that put so much care and thought into their stories. absolutely amazing and I hope you write again soon!

This was beyond sweet. I wish there was more of it. You're a brilliant writer - thank you for writing this

This is perfection.

I find this OS very good. I'm french (and very bad to write english), and I was searching for Zutara fanfic... but in french fandom there are so few fanfic with them (and a lot unfinished). So I came in english (language) fandom, and I'm happy to find this OS !

Thanks for this OS, I really enjoy it.

That was lovely. Thank you

From start to finish, perfectly amazing. Absolute most beautiful Zutara one shot I’ve had the privilege to read. Thank you for sharing this piece of breathtaking art.

This is great, I always thought that Zuko would have some issues with coming back to his family's summer house and the way you depicted this with the startling contrasts between Azula child persona and then her present attitude and of his loving mother that just isn't there anymore is amazing. I loved your description and how it seemed to fit in with Zuko's element, everything was somehow tied to fire and I really liked that.

The bro to bro talk with Sokka was pretty good. The show always seems to gloss over the fact that Sokka lost his mum too and the bit with him hearing her just for a while was heartbreaking, especially because in the show he mentioned that he doesn't remember how she looked like.

The last part when you had Zuko and Katara have their talk and getting those uncomfortable feelings and guilts out of Zuko was magnificent. It felt right that he would be forced, in a sense, by his own body to confess his problems and to finally talk. Them spending the night together and then talking some more afterwards about all the things that weighed on his mind and on her mind was pretty well done and the ending was perfect. Open but with a sense of finality that I really liked.

Great story!

This is beautiful. Thank you for posting it!