I love this!

This story is great! Sarah gives the feeling of someone struggling after the loss of her family. She attempts to put it behind her and start a new family until her past comes back to haunt her. I think it’s something very realistic to the real world and I know you said it was a one shot but it’d make a great story to continue.

Trully wonderfull! I didn't guessed that "him" was Rerugen till the end, but oh, that being X loves to mock of Tanya.

Please dont be a oneshot
Please update!

Asombroso. Gracias por permitirnos tener la oportunidad de leer esta hermosa obra de arte.

This has so much potential for a great multi chapter story, but it's also good as a one shot

Tanya, confused: What was her problem?

Interesting

A bit sad that this is it but okay

Come on dude, write another one already.

I know you said it was going to be aone-shot but this stuff si very good.

Kinda sad that this is a one-shot. I was hoping to see the implications of this, at least for Rerughen. Tanya wouldn't give a shit, if we're being honest.

OMG- she dated Rerugen LOL
Okay- why is this complete? Did her heart give out or something?
I can see her human struggle, very realistic... a mix of distant and also close to home.

Glorious. Simply glorious.

If she were ever to adopt Tanya again, it will be the greatest joke on Reurugen in history

Great idea and solid execution, here's hoping it doesn't stop at just one chapter. Just one thing: the text format is broken for some reason

Good god. Fixed