Me: HOLY SHIT YOU'RE BACK! Maaaaan, finally something I get to show for this day!

Ransuke: You are aware reading a fic doesn't count as an achievement, right?

Yuuren: Hey, leave our lovely little rose alone for a moment, will ya, new guy?

Me: Yeah, he's ri!-*Coughs and splutters* WHAT DID YOU JUST CALL ME!?

OC Pink: I can't fucking believe I'm saying this, but I'm thankful you gave me a new way to tease Rose, Norikawa.

Yuuren: Oh don't mention it, Pinky-chan!

Ransuke:... This is getting too lame for my liking. Hey Mizu, should we do the thing this time?

Mizumi: Sorry, too busy wrapping my head around the plot of another story. You're on your own.

Ransuke:. *Mumbles something that probably should be censored* Ugh, fine! I'm doing my first review myself, because, like, it's not that hard, right?

1-So...Yeah. Dream time with Yuuri (Or more like flashback time). Poor guy will never get a break, will he?

2-Kichirou's backstory sounds...Nice, to say the least. I wasn't a big fan of him since the start, to be frank. None of us were. So yeah, I guess I'll pass on further explanation.

3- Well, let's just say my brain was too tired to even process anything beside the fact that you're heavily disrespecting every single fan of Ryouga out there. I mean, I don't really LIKE the guy but, you literally demoted him to extra, amd some people may not be quite fine with that.

But overall, this is pretty good and I'm pretty sure we're all glad you're back to writing. Hope you're motivated enough to actually finish next chapter before Rose starts school...

Me: Right on, Ransuke! Keep the great work up, buddy, we've all got your back!

And don't worry. Lack of Motivation can be a bitch at times, but it goes away on its own so...Yeah.

This is Pink Rose, signing out!

Me: Oh hi again! Remember me?

OC Pink: I wouldn't be surprised if he didn't..

Me: Shut your mouth up, Pink! I'm not in the mood to write a long-ass review tonight (or today, it's 5:00 A.M right now)

OC Pink: Whatever..

Me: Good! So, nice chapter as always, I can see your writing skills are improving at an impressive rate from chapter to chapter, and I like it!

I think I'm modifying my favourite OC list:

1- Sigma

2- Shiki

3- Reisuke

Yuuren: For once, I agree with Rose there. This Sigma guy sounds like an interesting fellow..I'd love to meet him one day..

Me: Don't dream of it, Yuuren!

Anyway, I'm starting to get annoyed with the whole Grimoire thing for some reason, but the other plot revelances more than compensate for it *COUGHCOUGHHitotsunialertCOUGHCOUGH*, and I can't help but laugh my head off at the image of Kichirou chasing the butterflies!

So yes, color me impressed, and expect me to review this more often (and do expect my OC to butt in more often as well, so keep your guard up.)

See ya whenever the new chapter comes out!

This is Pink Rose, signing out!

Awesome duel. This gjves Yuzu character development to further grow strong. I hope to see more.

Good way in having Yuzu and Yuri lose. Definatly enjoyed Yuzu going berserk. It was a plesant surprise. Poor Ruri. Hope that she gets saved.

The introduction was awesome and i like the new characters you added to Jax and Demil. Can wait to see more.

Great duel, but this Progenitor monster seems a Shadow Card which inflicts real damage. The duelists in this chapter were confusing , but that is mostly because of their first appareance.

Awesome duel and development for Yuya.

Chapter 14

Very intense duel compare towards the original. Since i'm already 13 chapters in it seems a bit late to mention this but I have no idea what is going on with your oc and your original plot line. I love how your remaking the story with Yuri being switch but when it comes towards all the extra original stuff I'm just confused. Also merry late christmas.

Note since your making changes can you improve Reiji plan on taking on Academia. The more I think about it the more I think how pathetic it was that not one duelist from his school could actually take Leo's Duel soldiers. Majority of the Lancers were from different schools (and dimensions) plus when you think about it was also pretty pointless since Academia never attack Standard again (His top students all got defeated when they did showed up). They also spend their time in the Synchro and Xyz dimension fixing those dimensions problems. I felt that Reiji could had just walked up to the Fusion dimension himself and take on his dad himself.
Since Reiji and Yuri duel is going to be different can we see how much the Sakakis affected the way Yuri thinks. Pretty sure Yusho is going to brought up and it will be interesting to see the entertainment style he picked up from him. I know Reiji thinks Yuri is a spy for Academia so this is going to be interesting.

You say Yuri meltdown is going to be fun but i'm also worried about the meltdown that will happen once Yuya gets order to capture Yuzu. These poor kids. :'(

"Yuri's breakdown is going to be a fun one..." haha, I'll be looking forward for it then. I want to see his world burn. Anyway, it was a really long chapter, not that I'm complaining though. I like to read these characters and how you write them. Keep it up!

Wicked duel dude. You caught Yuya transformation in a soldier perfectly. Up in checking out my story and review it if you like it?
You wont regret it.

I've been waiting for this and you didn't disappoint.
It's always a pleasure to see Yuri showing emotions differently from the anime. However you reminded me how much I shipped? (that's the word? English is not my native language) Yuto and Yuzu back then! I mean, I don't know why but Yuzu is pretty matchable with every relevant male character she encounters.
Anyway you also reminded me my top one question in YGO arc v: why nobody let Yuzu duel?! First Yuto, then Yugo, also Asuka, and everyone is like: I will protect you. And everybody complains about that!
Ahhh OK, I really liked this chapter and I don't mind the amount of words. Maybe it's not always the more the better, but when it comes to duels is inevitable.
And uhhh I can't wait for the next chapters! If it is similar to anime, then Yuri's emotional breakdown by losing Yuzu is coming AND I REALLY LOVED HOW THE ANIME HANDLED YUYA AT THAT TIME. So I'm looking forward for it. Keep it up!

PD: and I want to see more of the ocs you have created. Demil is so... interesting xd

I like the story please update whenever you can. Pd: I would like more Yuri x Yuzu.