This is definitely one of the better fics I've read. Good luck on your instrument thing!

eeeeek please update soon ! :D

I'm beginning to suspect you're going to figure out how to work every character in Lackadaisy into this story... I'm looking forward to seeing if I'm right or not.
I also love the abrupt transitions, gives the whole thing a kind of cinematic feel.

interestiiiinggg

I'm very interested in seeing where this goes, good work.