You killed Shepard you cunttttttt!

Nooo what about pairings? - Me

"What about us ?"- Michael Jackson

This is a very good story!
I was concerned about the main character being to powerful but you have kept the story and johns power very interesting as well as engaging thus far and I have enjoyed it very much... Also the Reapers are bullshit anyway so no one can really complain about overpowered main characters.
However I feel that I must inform you that the reaper cannons are not laser weaponry but are actually magnetohydrodynamic cannons which fire streams of molten metal at a fraction of the speed of light to devastating effect, if you have ever seen a high pressure water sprayer cut through anything the principal is the same.
On another note when I finished chapter five I was a bit disheartened to see that you haven't updated in some time, and although I don't want to jump to conclusions, I wanted to tell you that I desperately hope that you'll continue this story as it is without a doubt a very well made, enjoyable, and interesting tale and I hope you can find time to keep going.
Keep up the excellent work and stay frosty.

The constant mispronouncing of Barla Von kinda annoyed me.

more so good.

it hurt to read this it was so cringy and crackish.

yeah im dropping this shitty fic. shepard dead

didint really like this its boring when everything goes too smoothly.

ch 3. idiotic turn of events

he would fit better into warhammer world or cultivation world than mass effect

dont really like mc personality

ch1. would have been better if mc gave the race name as Hollow and not Nephilim

ch1. it would be cool if mc has some drawing skills and he could draw all the monsters hes killed and shows them to shepard

felt a bit rushed but its interesting

not really a fan of suicide start