| Reviews for A Ghost's Free Day! |
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   SeriphXIII chapter 7 . 1/28 A pretty good story. I kind of want to see this one continue |
| miguel.puentedejesus chapter 4 . 7/29/2019 Perfecto! Me Encanto! Maravilloso! |
| miguel.puentedejesus chapter 3 . 7/29/2019 Maravilloso! Me Encanto! |
| miguel.puentedejesus chapter 2 . 7/29/2019 Maravilloso! Me Emociono Mucho! |
| miguel.puentedejesus chapter 1 . 7/29/2019 Exquisito! Perfecto! Me Emociono Mucho! |
| Guest chapter 7 . 7/11/2019 Hope you make more fics about danny not many out there like this one keep up i hope to see kore in the future |
| BoredKing chapter 4 . 6/30/2019 I recommend a beta or something, you don't have many spelling errors, or any really, but you are using incorrect wording and leaving out words left and right. Otherwise the story is fine. |
| AzureTemplar3535 chapter 7 . 6/17/2019 I love mother and son fun time, also brother and sister is entertaining too. Are you going to write more Danny/Maddie/ Jazz stories ? One more thing, are you planning on other family fun stories ? |
| Mr.unknow chapter 3 . 6/13/2019 is there an image of darla somewhere to look up to get an idea of what danny was looking at? with his sister and desire that easy enough. |
| The Brod Road chapter 7 . 6/12/2019 Ending the story and calling it done is one thing. But to end this story on such a tease? Come on, man... I hope you're planning on giving us a sequel to this about how Darla tries to get romantically involved with Danny, now that she has to contend with a family that's now almost as weird as the Addams Family. Of course, I say "almost" because at least the Fentons don't have the Addams' macabre hobby of trying to murder themselves and each other in various ways... I still think it'd make sense for the Fenton women to accept Darla into the relationship to help maintain the secret of the polygamous incest. I mean, the Fentons' reputation is already questionable at best because people think their brand of science is too unusual to be credible. Why add the scandal of incest to it? Therefore, have Darla be publicly known as Danny's girlfriend. (Besides, if Dash gave her Danny's number in an attempt to embarrass him, imagine Dash's reaction to Danny actually enjoying being with her. Take that, Dash! Lol.) Anyways, nice job with this story. I enjoyed it. :D Sequel please! |
| razmire chapter 7 . 6/11/2019 So this is the last chapter of the story. All good things must come to an end I suppose. |
| Smiling Lemon chapter 7 . 6/11/2019 Damn this was some good sexy fun and I kind of wish to see a short follow of chapter with Darla. But still this was great! |
| qazse chapter 7 . 6/11/2019 I hope there will one day be a sequel :3 |
| Smiling Lemon chapter 6 . 6/7/2019 Ah man that was some really sexy good fun and I can't wait to see how you wrap it up! |
