*Smiles sweetly* Well, hello there, sweetie~! It's nice that Ash is now finally in Alola now and I don't get why no one else hasn't left more comments in the comments section to be honest, 'cuz I think that your stories are simply fantastic!

Hmm, well now, it seems that a certain green-haired gal has taken a bit of liking to our Ash, now hasn't she?(Aka, Mallow) and yeah, I suppose I could see WHY so many guys at the Pokemon School would have such big crushes on the pretty greenette 'cause let's face the facts here people, to most guys, they more then likely think that she's a total bombshell! Granted though, I think that Lillie is much more pretty then Mallow to be completely & totally honest because she just looks so sweet & angelic-looking, especially what with her adorably shy and innocent personality~..

And heh, wow, Serena must be SUPER worried about Ash if she's willing to fly in Clemont's highly risky(And probably very unstable) airplane. Not that I could exactly blame her though, I'd be willing to do the exact same thing if someone that 'I' cared about about was potentially in danger as well... But just in-case though, Clemont had better pack an emergency inflateable raft and first-aide kit with 'em just in-case the plane happens to break down while they're flying.

Oh! And I really hope that Ash's Pokemon are all alright, from the ones that are currently in pain(if not hopefully getting treated by Nurse Joy) like Charizard or the ones like Oshawott who are simply exhausted to even the others who are all hopefully alright and hopefully even being cared for by the other students for the moment. But yeah, I'm just glad that for now everything is okay and yeah I agree with Mallow, for now, all that Ash needs is a nice, hot meal and a fresh change of clothes & if Kiawe doesn't have a shirt that Ash can borrow then I'm sure that he can just borrow a spare shirt from Sopleces' then..

And for now, I bid you Aidu~!

Great story forward to the next chapter

well so far im impressed with how you did with this chapter dude congrats ;) as a fellow amourshipper i have this to say to you and to all my fellow amourshippers around the globe who support amourshipping, amourshipper and proud, remember that dudes and dudettes and keep up the good serenaandashshipping work dude.

um im unsure if this counts if this counts as an amourshipping chapter dude but still your doing great. as a fellow amourshipper i have this to say to you and to all my fellow amourshippers around the globe who support amourshipping, amourshipper and proud, remember that dudes and dudettes and keep up the good serenaandashshipping work dude.

Ah the good old-fashioned love triangle, ya love to see it. I'm curious on how this is all gonna play out.

Serena to the rescue.

An amazing chapter here. Quite well-written. Has an awesome plot & great flow. Good 2 see u back! Can't wait 4 the next chapter!

Wow I am glad ash is oaky and is safe and sound in ahola and I really like that serana is on her way there to see her man even if she would admit to herself

Misty x Serena
#lesbianpokeamourshipping

Wow the tone of this story took a huge 180. You got me on my toes.

it seems like things are starting to look pretty odd in this chapter dude, but still your doing great ;) as a fellow amourshipper i have this to say to you and to all my fellow amourshippers around the globe who support amourshipping, amourshipper and proud, remember that dudes and dudettes and keep up the good serenaandashshipping work dude.

I hope ash can make it to dry land and I bet that hole was a uula hole and I hope serana figures out what or who she really wants in life

Ultra Beast strikes.

Ash has trained for years and charizard fled after single attack. Nihilego is not that powerful.

This chapter was quite a good one. The wormhole sequence was quite well written. Looking forward to read future chapters,

-AJ(Majestar)