All in all a good story so far. But you really could do with a better translator. You‘re confusing French with Italian and your French sentences make very little sense at all. Also, it should be "Signor“ and not "Seniorchapter 2). I really don't mean to be rude, but for me, the gibberish somewhat diminishes the enjoyment of reading your story ️

Now this is what I call an amazing fanfiction! Fantastic job, legit could not stop reading this until the end

It was awesome hon. I enjoyed it very much...thanks for sharing it with us...bigg huggs. Peggy

Cute ending. I’m enjoying this story

Love this story Good job

I’m enjoying watching Aro “woo” her (for lack of better description).

This was a beautiful story I loved it

Loved it!

I love your story. I was going to wait until I finished reading what you have written so far but this chapter was so enthralling. I love Bella and Aro and your explanation of hi heart stone and his lullaby. I absolutely just love it. I am looking forward to reading more. I am am truly enjoying it.

Thank you for sharing this one with us.

this was a good last chapter I thought. Wow so at least Bella didn't burn long going through her transition now and going to feed. I sure hope everything works out for her like it did. Thank you for sharing your awesome story with us. Have a good rest of the week.

wow this was a good chapter update, thank you for sharing with us. Wow the girls let Bella drink before her wedding, and she had a hangover before her special, day. I wonder where Aro is why wasn't he at the alter to get married yet. I hope all is alright and nothing happened to him right. Thank you again for the update, and have a good rest of the week. This is a good story and i'm enjoying reading this so far.

I like alot

Beautiful story.
Very well written you did a fabulous job

Great story thanks for sharing.