Tempest

Please update this

Can you update PLEASE!

I wish he had the Achilles curse tho

ummm...Caleb? I thought that Megan gave him the name Connor...

Okay, I love this story, but I can't agree with Percy having more relationships after Annabeth. Especially with Medusa! Plus, even this au Percy doesn't seem to be into just sexual relationships.

Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far

Excellent chapter and I'm really into the story. You've written an in character Percy with believable character development due to his century in Hell. I'm really looking forward to seeing more of this story and grateful that you're out here making so many PJ crossover fics.

My good man when will their be an update for this wonderful story

This story is awesome. I'm loving the interactions with between the team and how they're learning to overcome their differences, but want to see Batman put on his ass for betraying Percy's trust. I'm also curious about what Percy and Diana's relationship is. I know it's not exactly a protogue one or just non-biological cousins and they appear to be heading towards more than friends which would be an amazing twist and completely different arc from most crossovers.

Anyway please keep going with this story as I'm hooked and can't get enough of it. And please update more regularly, it's going on 5 months since the last update

The story is well-written but entirely too poorly conceived.

Percy's personality is all over the place to the point he doesn't have one, He wants to be a hero and join the league but fundamentally disagrees with their ideals. Percy is a reluctant hero, he wouldn't go seeking that shit out. Honestly the his whole characterization is poor- a hardened war veteran who spent a century in hell isn't going to follow Diana's lacking advice much less Dinah's but the being in hell thing only plays a part in the story when you want shoe-horn in mental instability and cheap angst with flashbacks.

Your use of Percy's abilities is the equivalent of picking up a slingshot instead of the gun easily within reach.

Both your concept and logic behind the fight scenes is incredibly poor. Your fight scenes are incredibly skewed to favor the justice league and you shift the goalposts whenever it suits you- Fight with Dinah 'the more skilled fighter wins'- Fight with Diana 'Brute force'.

Seriously... just write a justice league fic. You already tarnished your current MC too much for this story to have any satisfactory conclusion- Percy will never be an equal with any of the Justice League, just one of many minor heros in the DC universe. The fight with Wonder Woman making that painfully obvious.

I mean, You don't even take your Percy seriously in the DC universe, Why they fuck should anyone else?

will there be a sequel?

Nice

Really good so far I really enjoyed it keep up the good work chief

this is fucing amazing...hope u continue dis sooon