Wow that was great! Loved the intensity. I don't suppose you could pm me your other account? I'd love to read your other works!

Wonder if other victims of the akuma had similar problems.

Smokin' hot and sweet at the same time - great job! :)

There were just a couple mistakes in spelling, and a few combined words, but it was good!

the ending was hilarious!
very well written! I hope to read more of your stories!

LOVE IT!

Now that was one HOT and steamy story!

Thank you - and please don't be embarrassed.

I liked it.

Oh my word, that was one of the best fics i have read, the writing was well done and the story was excellent, C'était magnifique

Oh my dear god! This was so deliciously sinful and well written! I have to admit the descriptive imagery and deeply seated feelings really added to the story, this definitely not smut, it’s a beautiful piece of work! Well done, you should definitely not be embarrassed, I get it because of the , you know..., but it’s so nicely written you should be proud, even if it’s hiding under the covers!

Such an amazing job! Don't be shy and embarrassed. I can't understand that feeling though. You did a great job and did the story justice. A good amount of love and passion for a highly thought of couple. Keep up the great work and be proud of yourself.

ohh la la , this was nice

It's really amazing your writing is good

That was about fantastic! So well written!

Oooh love the sensual detail and emotional investment in this. You have a talent for detailing this that defies your mentioned lack of experience.
I should hope you continue to share your stories with us, M rating or not. XD

If you hadnt have said that you had never done this before I would have thought you had been doing it for years. So incredibly passionate and heated. I look forward to more of your more *saucy* works
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