I want to make them look better but they look like so cute haha

it's an ight story but some parts dont go so well. overall you could've wrote a story like everyone else not just chapters and one long paragraph. and question. is Arnold gay in your story?

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In the defense of my comment, it was a satirical comment based off a running gag that this fandom has. Anybody who has read stories on here knows that. It was not a personal attack on the author themselves. I just wished that the author actually made a story versus just reposting plot threads,changing them around, and then claiming it to be their own.

I've been an author on this website for a long time. I'm in college currently so I have a faint idea as to what is content and what is not. It just makes me angry that stories like this one exist. I am not trying to make this person feel like less of a person I just wished that they were able to put effort into what they do.

It's a fair jab. I've seen this go on for a while now.

You realize you can't post a story that's just plotlines and call it art right? This isn't a story. It really isn't. Whisper is fair in her judgement.

So I can see the hate comments being made about Whisper. Guys, she's fair in her judgment about this "story" and "story" I say in air quotes. This is just plotlines of episodes the fandom has seen before. This is not a story. You can't just accuse somebody of hurting somebody's self-confidence when somebody makes a fair point about something. It just goes to show how childish the fandom is. Stories require effort to be put into them. It's an art form. Same as actually drawing. You guys need to have standards when it comes to the art form.

You can't just rehash already existing plotlines and call it your own either. It's not effort...it's plagiarism. I can tell that you are young and have no idea how to write a story but you really should have paid attention in school.

Where I do not think that was really great

Your Kapi was wonderful. Well written right. I'm already excited how to go on

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Hey das nicht schlecht gemacht. Du hast eine echt gute Ansätzen. Ich finde einfach göttlich.

DRhallowingwhispers would you just give it a rest? it is writers like you that knock everyone else's self esteem honestly like think you would be a bit more mature than that.

I think it's great that you're writing all of this, but you've gone for quantity over quality. I think you should maybe choose one episode and concentrate on making it really good with lots of original details that makes it more interesting and focus on grammar and punctuation.
Maybe pick your favourite episode or idea and change it a bit. Make it about 2000 words plus and concentrate on making the story more unique.

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