well atleast the sexy Orc didn't die, really enjoyed the 2 chapters here hope you'll come back to it eventually

'Touch' is a little too powerful. The protagonist can literally conquer the world merely by being patient for a year - and of course, targeting important individuals. Secondly, the choice of race for a man of great ambitions seems to a folly. Half-Elf, in Skyrim? With ambition to be not only be Highking, but possible Emperor of Tamriel? Very irrational. It also doesn't help the protagonist is constantly justifying his actions, one can only hope he matures in the future. For a supposedly dark soul, chosen for unabashed entertainment, the characterisation certainly is faulty.

So first off I damn near always side with the empire, just kinda feel like a dick if I don’t. secondly, need more of this like right now, this crap is hilarious!

You spelled dais as dias twice now. The impending sex scene too distracting for you?

Man, i really love the story so far, i looking for more of this, if you want to im here to read it. Good luck with the life.

¡Hasta otra!

Please update good plot and potential

Mods? Oh yasss hopefully we will have the cute Mrissi?

My thoughts while reading this;
Just because someone likes the thief stone doesn’t make them a criminal Hadvar. (Totally how he’d react though)
That is one sarcastic spellbook.
That is one aggressive, hard to please Orsimer.
And Bitchy's name means Bitch lol.
Keep it up :3

Those last two lines perfectly sum up this first chapter.
Yes, he can do it... but he might just die instead.

All around I really love the story, love the way you described the all the fights and they were awesome I especially love how the characters are not perfect.

I also love that much like in the first chapter you showed with the bear that the system can and will conflict and make sense with the real world as in the bears pelt was intact yet you have to physically skin it yourself to get it due to the system not showing it in the inventory, that and due to this no longer being a game, you can set buildings on fire and stuff that you couldn't do originally like the sword and shield creating sparks on the oil, also looking forward to the possibility of your character exploring creating his own spells especially if he can try to get really into illusion to the point he can make stuff equivalent to the subtle genjutsu of naruto, or pull an aizen from bleach, heck make yourself an insane life force drain user.

Things like that and enchanting which I have been thinking to myself about the when enchanting thing to begin with, how the hell did they get enchantments in the first place if you have to break down the equipment with said enchantment, it's like the chicken and the egg, especially if you can start creating new original enchantments like spells

And I also love the way you do the sex scenes, the first one being more emotional and the other one being more descriptive, and in my eyes you do the best I have seen so far mainly because they are not overbearing or take away from the story itself! Keep up the amazing work

Needing to go back to the menu to use magic is not practical at all...

it's always the black guy or girl in this story.

like it!

I love this

Love it.

This is the second story of yours I’ve read and it’s turning out awesome.