Reviews for The Best Christmas Present Ever
natanaid chapter 1 . 6/13
This is just so cute. Love it. Thanks for writing this beautiful piece of work.
Jeraly chapter 1 . 4/21
Beautiful story!
kimbclar chapter 1 . 12/24/2019
Excellent
anidot90 chapter 1 . 12/5/2019
Adorable! Second Christmas reading this, definitely gonna do it again next year! :)
Ponine099 chapter 1 . 5/22/2019
Aww, loved it. Wonderful writing, and though I don't usually enjoy this kind of fluff, it was very enjoyable and cute. Thanks
HelenPotter91 chapter 1 . 3/22/2019
I loved this! wonderfully written xox
Delusional Darcy chapter 1 . 3/6/2019
This was adorably cute.
AuntCori chapter 1 . 1/8/2019
This is SO sweet!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/7/2019
Loved this so much! You write dramione family so well, would love to see another work like this, or even a sequel. Yours is the first that actually makes me want to read more about lucius and narcissa as loving grandparents to dramione's kids!
LostBeingMe chapter 1 . 1/6/2019
I loved this! I liked how both Lucius and Narcissa did the exact same thing about presents and thought the other would not approve. I love Amanda! She's quite adorable.
MissReads chapter 1 . 1/3/2019
I've had a bit of a rough week and decided to read a few fics to distract myself with. Just wanted to say that I am so glad to have stumbled upon your story. I haven't smiled this much in weeks. Thank you for the wonderful story, you are an amazing writer! You portrayed the characters so well that I couldn't stop grinning like an idiot the entire time I was reading this!
Emily chapter 1 . 12/30/2018
Loved this so adorable!
hisnhers chapter 1 . 12/29/2018
awwwww. So glad they took their heads out of the backsides. lol! Honestly, all that sneaking around was quite cute.

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rabradley09 chapter 1 . 12/28/2018
That was adorable!
Bionically chapter 1 . 12/28/2018
This was very nicely done! I loved the miscommunication between Lucius and Narcissa and the humorous notion of them hiding from each other. Lucius pointing at toys with his walking stick was hilarious.

A small area to improve would be to go through and change all the "has" to "had," so that your story has the correct tense. This doesn't detract from the quality of your writing, however! Thank you for this delightful work.
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