there is quite a difference between ultron finishing an almost done code and fully taking over and him suddenly appearing out of the stone...

if your avengers are so important then why does he not include the x-men and the fantastic four?
simple ofc these 2 didnt show up in mcu but do in your story as a half forgotten side note that doesnt really matter

so far you've been betting on a better outcome by making sure ppl arr in better mental health, as far as i can see this will only prevent Acivil war

i really dont understand why half your story plays in the future, hell more then half.

the war of NY is nothing more then a side note, like its just not important

time traveling only not to change anything cause you wouldnt know what happens anymore. if you wont change anything why bother time traveling. and really aslong as he doesnt stop the tessaract being used nothing will interfere with thanos thus he can fix earth as best as possible.
i have to see if you keep up with this whining or actually gonna change something else im done quite fast

the whole piece on plan a was not needed and in the long haul what does one general matter compaired to thanos

This was stunning. I adored your story-telling method, contrasting Plan A and Plan Z scenes. Thanks for all of your hard work on behalf of your readers.

Well...that was awesome. Time travel stories are all over the place but some aren't very good. This one really hit the sweet spot for me. I just could not stop reading! The story line didn't get sidetracked by delving too far into the personal problems of dealing with watching everything happen a second time, with I thought was a feat unto itself. And then it ended. I would say in the best way possible, but man, would I love to hear Pepper's reaction to this! Terrific job! You're a great writer, so keep going with it!

This story was amazing! I loved the honest depictions of each character as a lot of it tends to be brushed off by other authors. Thor does grieve, Steve is selfish and one track minded, JARVIS isn't all knowing, etc. I have been blessed to be able to read this, thank you!

I enjoyed reading this, rate highly and find it more realistic in how it was portrayed compared to other fix-it fan fiction regarding all fandoms.

So... Plan A is like, just after the civil war, and Plan Z is... the first movie? Like, Iron Man's first movie? Please halp, I have no clue what's going on and I want to.

I've just stumbled across your work today, and was intrigued by the title and log-line. This is fantastic. It's clever, and insightful, and you've nailed the characterizations, especially, of course, Tony's internal voice. I was extremely reluctant to watch Civil War when it came out because the camaraderie of the Avengers was special and worth preserving and protecting. In your story, you've managed to both acknowledge and illuminate the fractures within the group while also restoring and improving upon those friendships and collegial dynamics as Tony battles against his future knowledge to the best of his abilities. What a marvelous accomplishment on your part. Thank you for your efforts and deft touch.

Holy crap this is good.

That was a very well written and thought out story. Amazing. I love Tony (he's my favorite) and I'm glad he's happy and not dead! Awesome story, thanks for writing it !

I loved this story. Thanks