dont see review that can make your hurt. we'll waiting updates from your beloved fanfic

At The-girl-who-loves-adventure:
True to a certain extent but everyone is untitled to their opinions. DON'T POST ON AN OPEN FORUM if you can't stand the heat!
As one dramione downer posted "IF you don't tell them (they're wrong), HOW ARE THEY SUPPOSED TO LEARN!"
Many awful stories out there to critique on & I'm not containing mine to any one ship or type; this fic is very good in some parts & incredibly mediocre in others. Get that "samey" vibe with too many Hr/D postings but then trope has been done to death for so long as to be beyond cliché now. There are whole websites dedicated to ridiculing many ships - and drarry & dramione always score most hits and posts.
Just saying

ignore that previous guest ask. I see reviews like that everywhere. idk why someone who seemingly hates dramione would read a fic tagged dramione. write the plot you want and dont let people like this dictate what you do with your story.

What if Hermione was a pureblood and sorted into Slytherin?
She isn't and she wasn't! Why don't you silly dramione authors actually come up with some original plot devices?
(coz your all brainless Draco fangirls who can't get beyond daydreaming of Tom Feltham's butt, that's why)

I hope you don't mind some constructive criticism. You have a great storyline but it is let down by poor grammer,spelling and ducking backwards and forwards between past and present text. If you could get someone to read through your chapters before you publish them they could correct them for you. I love the story but am distracted by all the mistakes. I am sure you 'rd story will be great and hope you don't take offence. I just look forward to enjoying the next chapters though.

Please continue to grace us with updates I’m so loving this️

The premise of this story sounded amazing and I was looking forward to see where you took it. But it’s to hard to read, it needs editing. The conversations are all jumbled together. Every time someone new speaks it should start in a new line, not all be jumbled into one paragraph.

I think I love my Dad (Voldemort)

Ron bashing parts! good I don’t like him that much and Hermione should have ended up with Draco Malfoy so Ron can jump into the Black Lake

Starting to read hope you finish it

haven't started reading yet but to encourage you ti finish it leaving a review. I'll start reading once it's completed. Downloaded already.

Ooo I wonder how they will figure they're way on getting the stone without Dumbledore knowing.

Ooo this chapter was very interesting, I enjoyed reading it.

I like how energetic and carefree Draco was during the break. I enjoyed reading this chapter.

Ooo I enjoyed reading this story and chapter. I like the twist of things.