plz plz update i love ur writing and you still haven't uploaded anything more. i beg u

They this is awesome plz update I love ur writing style I think ur one of the greatest writers I have ever seen

This is AMAZING, am absolutely LOVING this fic can't wait for the next update xxx

ur great. i dont know how u come up with all these snarky comebacks. ur a fantastic writer. plz update

Tiffany is like the stereotypical cheerleader chapter. I want to slap her. This chapter was very amusing to read.

I prefer reading these chapters from one person's point of view because it's less confusing but it was really nice being able to see inside Will's head. He doesn't seem to think about Thea a lot does he ;) great work

Llamacorn

That was cute. But the beginning was creepy. I want to know what that dream was about. This was a well written chapter. good job

Llamacorn

They have to meet soon. But I feel like when they do it'll cause trouble. I don't like the sound of that tiffany or Jackson. This chapter was good and I like your writing style.

Go Thea! That was great. I love reading when characters get all sassy and have an attitude I just get this feeling that makes me feel all sassy as well I guess. This was great chapter and is going beyond my expectations really.

Things are starting. But there's going to be trouble I can tell. It's not a Benedict soulfinder story if there isn't. Thid is great so far. I'm really liking it and your style of writing.

I love how this has started. It is a strong start and it can only get better right?

Llamacorn