I think it would be hilarious to have a Tyrian that worships ruby like he does salem but Torchwick and neo would probably be a more reasonable option to be on the side of good even if they're not actually that good.

This was bloody amazing and I can’t believe it hasn’t updated in almost a year. It’s so damn good plz if you can update it would make my day!

Damn. This was good. I mean, holy cripes you planted seeds and made them grow. From the Faunus to Silver eyes, the future interacts with past and magic. Not only that but the character interactions whoo and pacing! I mean, there's definitely problems. Ie the grammar and somewhat with the dream sequences - which were fucking fantastic - needing a little work. But you otherwise nailed it dude. Or didette.

Please don't be that guy and simply stop writting this story. It is really good and i would like to see what happen's next.

This is great story please do not let it end like this. I hope you will update soon but for now take care and stay healthy.

I wonder if this will ever continue. Its probably the only full au I not only like but that actually kept me exited for new chapters.

And of course it stops just when we start meeting the whole team. I feel like thats a trend in rwby storys where the 4 characters take a while to meet.

Emerald and Mercury could probably get redemption, if only because they're the most sympathetic characters on Team Salem right now. Hazel, Watts, and Tyrion need to die tho. Two of them are insane and the third has an ego so huge that it's just annoying.

Don't let this story die! It's a fascinating universe and I really want to see more of it :)

This is such a good story I cannot wait for the next chapter.

I am really invested in this story and I'm curious to see where it goes. I was hooked in from chapter 1 and I ended up binging it in one day. I really like your writing style and I can't wait to learn more about Cinder and how the dream thing works. Also I was so excited when I found out it was a pollination story, a slow burn one at that. Most pollination stories I see are all about smut, great to see some really good plotnot that I don't like smut but pollination needs more fics haha). Anyways seeing as it's been a while since the last update, this is just me hoping you'd see this and give it some thought. Either way great fic you have here~

Amazing read and realistic progression of characters and relationships, but sadly seems to be a while since the last update. Me and many others are keeping an eye for it though! Cheers!

I've loved this story from when I first started to read it, are the next chapters on their way. (sorry if I come across as impatient)

Firstly to answer your question, I’d redeem Torchwick. Predominantly because he was always a very grounded character. He found himself in with Vulcan’s way out of his league and do what he had to do he’d survive. Logically sound motivation. Now to ask a question of my own; you’re still working on this story right? Please say yes, I’m invested in this.

It's around the 5th time I've read entirely this story and I just LOVE IT ! I love how you write Ruby and Cinder, they are awesome ! I also love Yang (she's greaaat), Weiss (SHE'S AMAZING) and Blakescreaming! The plot of this story is just soooo interesting ! I love all the... visions (idk if it's the good word, sorry) of the Futures Ruby, every one of them are sooo great ! This story can be dark but it's also sooo funny ! I found the meeting of Blake particulary hilarious xD I can't wait to see more of this story ! (I've waited for weeks already, I can wait way more but, I'll be sure to be here the minute I'll see it updated !)

#Torchwickisnestvillan

Someone prove me wrong :3

ROMAAAAAAN
Honestly I really enjoyed Roman's character. I'm a real sucker for redeeming bad guys in general. Cinder and Neo too, and maybe Emerald and Mercury also.