Amazing! Love your writing style!

Love this.

i love your writing style and wish you would continue this...through Sirius's POV of him falling for her and becoming obsessed with her...culminating in them finally having sex

please think about it!

great great story! I want a new chapter!

Uhhhhhhh can we make this a two shot? That was amazing!

God. This was so hot. Sirius has a very good imagination.
I'll be so happy if you decide to continue this.
Thanks for it! I'll be waiting for the next chapter! (Of this or approaching the paradox(I love that they are so different, however, so cools))

Please tell me there will be another chapter! So good, loved it!

Really good start please update soon

I loved this! Until Hermione called for Sirius AGAIN a great and sweet tension built and built and built and I was desperately anticipating for Sirius to just REALIZE. Their thoughts, especially Hermione's from the very beginning (hearing the voices, coming inside, getting to his bed), were all so detailed, gradual and believable. I was convinced even more than Hermione that she *should* help Sirius with how she convinced herself! :D And Sirius own thoughts by the end was so perfect and on point! I really loved it. Your writing style is so very enjoyable, and I admired how there were a great variety of sentences that prevented any repetition and overall helped the flow of the story. LOVED IT. THANK YOU. I hope you'll consider getting back to this story :)

Please please please continue this!

I really hope you expand on this one shot

awesome

Really hot, but wish it was hotter! Haha
Can't wait to read more!

Need. More. Please.

Really enjoyed this, and a considerate Sirius. I hope this is continued. Also shameless begging for Property of Sirius Black to be continued too.