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Purple has a lot of self improvement to do but opening up seems to be a start. It was a great perspective on both of them.

I totally get that work has to come first. That's life. Don't stress yourself out. I've always found that writing was a good way to relax on a day off though.

And don't let that person flaming it get you down. They seemed to have missed your intent a lot. And honestly stories can't all be clear cut and nonoffensive. They'd stink. I think you are doing a good job so far. Can't wait for the next chapter, whenever you get the chance.

I'm pretty sure that the Sobrekt will return. I mean Mizorant wouldn't let her enemy Purple live but I'm pretty sure that the Shuryo will not be happy when he realises that Mizorant attacked the Massive without him knowing.

Really liking the emotional drama of them finally opening up to each other and properly addressing things.

Keep up the good work.

Zim'sMostLoyalServant signing off.

Purple's past with Rik certainly explained part of his personality and actions, wow.

It's interesting isn't it? On the one part we got to see a vengeful Purple but we also got to see the Purple that is excited to be a father and give his smeet everything in the universe.

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I'm sorry, but for you to say that purple, a manipulate, abusive rapist would be a good father last me. How could you believe that someone this terrible is a good father? Most of this story is abuse, rape and victim blaming.

It's like you enjoy romanticize abuse and victim blaming is the way to get a man and a kid. In the end, Tenn just gotta shut up and be a good fuck, baby maker? Cause that's all she is now

Ah I love this story so much!

This story is coming along excellently and I can't wait to see more about Purple's past. Gives more depth to the charachter.

Glad that they're safe and got that thing out of Tenn. And here's hoping that she and Purple can continue developing as they have.

Also, loving how even in a reality where Red owns him, he still can't stand Cheesecake.

Keep up the good work.

Zim'sMostLoyalServant signing off.

That's one scary device Tenn had in her spooch-sac, good thing Lena took it out, I would hate to think what hell Purple and Tenn would've gone through had it been used.

Anyway it seems like Tenn is beginning to get fond of Purple, seems like indeed, all it took what getting kidnapped by the Soberkt for the walls to break.

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Uuuugh while I think this was really sweet. Anything with them getting to a good ending just feel manipulated and just forced! Ahhh I hate purple so much! And I really love purple too! But I just wanna chop his head off! Please give Tenn and better lover! She deserves someone better! Purple can go get raped and fuck off! Ekdndjd I'm just so angry with him!

I just don't see a real relationship with them. Poor Tenn, please escape! Purple doesn't deserve any children!

I love seeing this side of Purple and Sakr helping them escape and the bit about the child not paying for the father's mistakes? Loved it. Can't wait for more. This is a very good story.

It might not of happened exactly how they thought it would, but at least they managed to make it out

I imagine someone isn't to happy about this though

I'm am positive that Sakr is talking from experience, perhaps not his own but he's definitely seen something

Hopefully now that their free they'll be able to figure out what's wrong with Tenn and save both her and the smeet.

absolutely amazing chapter and I can't wait for more :D

Well, that was a pleasant surprise, though it raises questions. And it's good to see Tenn and Purple continuing to properly bond, though I'm sure he'll screw it up when they get back to the Massive.

Keep up the good work.

Zim'sMostLoyalServant signing off.

"...A child shouldn't have to pay for his father's mistakes."

Yeah, very wise thing coming from Sakr, I would hope Purple would listen to those words but considering how uncaring and ungrateful he was even to his own soldiers, I doubt he will, for a time at least.

Good to know that he and Tenn are on the way back to the Massive but they still have a long way to go to be ok, but hopefully they'll be on the right track.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.