| Reviews for Paternal Instincts |
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   HarukaChihiro chapter 5 . 3/19 This is a good job, hope you continue with this, I like the plot. Keep going! :-) |
| Guest chapter 5 . 2/26 Why don't you update your work? You are so unreliable! |
| Guest chapter 5 . 2/26 You've made tons of mistakes in these five chapters. You suck. |
| Guest chapter 5 . 12/7/2019 Good job. |
| Guest chapter 5 . 12/7/2019 More? |
| little miss BANANNA HEAD chapter 5 . 11/26/2019 There are only a handful of typos, and they’re negligible if anything. This is honestly amazing quality for something typed out on the phone. I’m impressed. Wew. |
| Guest chapter 4 . 10/2/2019 What boss was Peter talking about? This doesn't make any sense. And watch your capitalization and the rest of your grammar. |
| Guest chapter 4 . 10/2/2019 You have too many spelling and grammar mistakes. You need to watch out for that and read over your work before you post it. Fix that when you have a chance. I'm glad you updated this story. Hope you continue to updated and you don't abandon it like you've done before. |
| A chapter 3 . 7/23/2019 Need more! Gimme more! |
| I.D.'s Fantasy chapter 3 . 7/21/2019 I went in sceptical, but this is actually pretty good. Great work! :D |
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/20/2019 Whao! More please! |
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/18/2019 More! More! |
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/17/2019 Stop teasing me! Stop rewriting the story! You start writing the story and I get excited only for you to stop writing and redo it! Just stick with a plot point and do it! This is a good plot and I want to see it followed through! |
| 0 chapter 3 . 7/17/2019 You have Daredevil in this? Yes! Awesome! Please update! |
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/16/2019 Love it! More! |
