I'm kinda wanting to see them react to the shame-lessness of waxia (cn light novels) like Long Live Summons or Worlds' Apocalypse Online, though i really enjoy Death March. It is fairly slow this version, but it is more of a rough draft anyway. Though it probably is the most easy one to acess.

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The more you are into the fic, the more condenscending and hyprocritical and holier then thou attitude from Rwby and Jnpr
Its sad that they are reduced to this arrogant people

This is great but each and every little time, The rwby and Jnpr are condenscending towards satou. Every chapter is like that, not knowing they themselves has a story and mistakes, just like Satou

Why make this if the characters won't like it? What's the point?

As someone that greatly enjoys Death March, I'm a bit conflicted. Part of me is glad to see a reaction fic of it, while the other half sees it as the RWBY cast just constantly complaining. This makes me wonder if you, the writer, even like the story, or at least the Web Novel version of it.

Maybe I'm just a more patient person than others, but I feel that the pacing is fine. Slow, sure, but it helps give a better picture of the world and how the character, Satou in this instance, sees it.

Honestly, as much as I want to read a reaction fic of RWBY reading Death March, if it's only going to be constant complaints, I'm going to have to stop here.

You really shouldn't read something you don't like or is too slow-paced for you to enjoy. No reason to bash on it so much.

Rather than another isekai series I think a good one to have them read would be Heavy Object. At the very least Ruby would geek out over the designs of the Objects, plus I think the rest might like the idea of a super weapon that means not as many people need to put themselves in danger fighting the Grimm.

Poor RWBY and JNPR...They should be reading something else.

You wanna do a Isekai please do the reacting to Konosuba. I am sick of this death march. Atleast the anime version has some action to it.

Bring back Professor Arc please, not like this.

I would recommend using the light novel instead of the web novel, as it’s pace and changes remove most of the things you’re having issues with, its much more suited for this kind of format.

ok, although I hope and make a fic where you can see dimensions of juane arc which is my favorite character of RWBY

can I suggest just speeding through the chapters and summarizing the text. perhaps just show the anime

I agree with you in that as slow as the novel itself is I don't believe that either RWBY or JNPR would be able to stand much more of the story. I will vote yes soon as I get to my computer but one thing that might make a difference would be if they skipped a little further or if you had them switch to the anime since the anime has a much different pace.

Death March is very meh...you would have been better off having them read and react to the light novels of Overlord,Youjo Senki or That Time i got Reincarnated as a Slime or even Re:Zero.

yes, continue but let them read something more saying that it's like a death march break for now