Reviews for Lincoln Loud, Motel Manager
Thekingofgames12345 chapter 6 . 5/12
I hope Lincoln and belle hit it off at some point
I love a happy ending
crimson dust cloud chapter 4 . 3/11
The more I read this story I feel it's more better than the show itself, cause nobody in that family really don't care how much Lincoln has done for them, while they keep acting like he was a problem child of the family I also glad Lucy was the one to tell them how selfish they was towards Lincoln, even if Lincoln is selfish at times in the show he still try to be better of himself, unlike his family anyway great chapter.
crimson dust cloud chapter 3 . 3/10
#danny phontom invader Zim rockos modern Life, and go to hell Lori also cool chapter .
SapphireAsashi chapter 4 . 1/24
Jesus fuck stop with the stupid long AN's at the end!
CalvinFujii chapter 6 . 12/11/2019
Really liking this so far! Hope there's more of Belle the Thicc QT.
LiteralTrash001 chapter 6 . 12/8/2019
This may be a nit pick but I don’t think motels are designed to attract locals. The main point of a motel is as a rest stop for people who travel cross country (things like vacationers and truckers). So I don’t think it makes sense for Luna to try putting on entertainment to attract locals. Still love the story though.
Tristen chapter 6 . 12/7/2019
Are you ready for Christmas?
364wii chapter 6 . 12/7/2019
Um Lincoln your were kicked out of your house and your sister threatened you with a bat, little to giving aren't ya?
Well guess more work is going into the Motel half of the story.
qazse chapter 6 . 12/7/2019
I feel that they made up too quick, and Lincoln forgave his family way to easily.
Mysterious Mr M chapter 6 . 12/7/2019
Lynn's apology feel sfarvtoo quick and forced to me.
sky3427 chapter 6 . 12/7/2019
Glad this story is back! Glad Lincoln some of the problems between each other are getting resolved.
Mr. Freeman chapter 6 . 12/7/2019
You know, this would make a great mobile phone game.
Gamelover41592 chapter 6 . 12/7/2019
excellent work on this chapter and glad you had them patch things up :)
Engineer1869 chapter 6 . 12/7/2019
Glad to see this getting updated.

I say that Lynn Sr. getting laid off was karma for the bad luck incident and possibly enabling Luan by buying the hotel. At least it looks like this hotel has a good chance of being successful.

My biggest complaint about the chapter was Lynn Jr. and Lincoln's make up. Lincoln did try being honest and asking for free time and Lynn Jr. threaten him with a baseball bat.

Anyway I look forward to seeing where this story goes. Keep up the good work.
Mr. Haziq chapter 6 . 12/7/2019
Hey! It's not dead! Yay!
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