Good read, except Neo will do something that'll make fans hate her. Backstabbing Cinder will only endear her to the FNDM more, not less. It'll be a while before Cinder dies. All signs seem to be pointing to Ruby possibly losing one of her silver eyes around the finale. It'll make a great parallel to Maria's experience and reinvent Ruby as a character. Right now she's becoming an untouchable Mary Sue and I need to see that her plot armor can be breached.

I agree with this completely. Thank you for putting into words what many of us thought, my friend sent me a link to this story because she feels the same way.

Yeah, I also think Neo will backstab Cinder.

Amazing

This looks very interesting. I wonder what is going to actually happen between those two.