Where have you been

hey what about lady green what will she do to Lin Chung

where are you and why did you stop your hero 108 story and what about lin chung

HEY where you go why you stop

hey why did you stop

A short chapter, but an interesting one nonetheless. I’m glad to learn more about Autumn’s life before Big Green. And to unleash Autumn’s demons like that!

The story is progressing nicely. I can’t wait to read more and learn about Autumn and her demons. Keep up the good work!

I see your writer’s block cleared up! And I’m sooooo glad it did! The bit with Tempest in drag had me laughing out loud! And the line ‘in a horde of righteous furry anger’ was amazing! X’D

I can’t wait to find out more! And to introduce Mr. No-Hands’ wife like that! My only question is how does First Squad not recognize Blayze’s voice? He has a very distinctive way of talking and a unique pitch that they should recognize. Unless he’s disguising his voice, they should know who he is.

Other than that, I can’t wait to read more! Update soon, I beg of you!

yo, where are you why you stop anyway are you close to pastelpandora because ever since the PM has been disabled, I RAN OUT OF PLACES TO WRITE REVIEWS, please ask and review her when is her next story is for me please

I didn’t think it was possible to hate Wu Fan any more than I did, but congratulations, you succeeded.

Really, though, the story is great. Just be sure to tie up all the loose ends you’ve started. I’m interested in Heikin’s rivalry with Mystique Sonia. I can’t wait to learn more about it. And what deal did Heikin make with a demon?

Hurry Lin Chung! You must save her from the potion!

Can’t wait for more!

Can I tell you something? I read Ram King like he was Scottish! It’s great! (Doesn’t make sense, but it made me laugh!)

As for the chapter, the stakes have been raised again! Will Lin Chung freeze? Will Autumn marry that odious man? And what happened to Mr. NoHands? So many questions!

I can’t wait for more! :D

Just reading about the potion’s effects make me want to slap her. I can’t believe how it’s making her act! But I’m curious as to what the potion on her clothes did. Was that the thing that made her hungry?

Ah! I’m so excited by how this is going! On to the next chapter!

Geez, I hate that guy! This is such a great story, and you keep adding more and more twists and turns! I love the way Lin Chung still loves Autumn and is fighting to love her. The introduction of other witches is also interesting.

I can’t wait for more!

Aaaaaaahhhhhh! That was too much! So it WAS magic that Lady Green was using! Oh, wow, you are brutally torturing Autumn! That’s just like a read writer! And you know the saying, “If you don’t know what to do next, break your character’s leg!”

Wow, this is just too much! That was an intense chapter! I need more! Wow! Tempest is going to FLIP! Hahaha!

Sorry for the long wait, but I’ve been busy with Christmas stuff.

Anyway, this is AMAZING! The story keeps getting richer and richer. I can’t wait to read more! Lady Green’s new appearance is fascinating, and her strange hold on Lin Chung is mysterious. Is she using magic to entice him? Or is it something else?

And Autumn’s body image issues are realistic. I think if you decide to rewrite the story (not to ch age everything but to improve it) you should sprinkle in the thoughts beforehand. But it really is good.

And I don’t know why, but I want to see the Princess and the Frog!

More trouble and closer friendships. I love the dynamic between Sonia and Autumn. Two girlfriends just hanging out and talking about life. (And bearing the crap out of some boys.)

Ugh, that Wu Fan is HORRIBLE. I despise him, so you’re doing a great job at making him unlikeable. And then to throw Lady Green in at the end! Was she spying the whole time? How does she know that Autumn spurned Wu Fan? Who knows! She’s mysterious!

I can’t wait to read more! Keep on developing those characters and making the plot more interesting!