Awesome update. Looking forward to seeing how things progress.

I can't go on, even if it's AU this is just sad. This whole scenario wouldn't work if Issei is a Demigod.

1st Rias wouldn't be able to turn him into a devil. She's a total weakling and could barely turn him in canon. ( I do know this is an AU, but I get the feeling that Rias is still a Prima Donna looking for others to save her. That's just sad. )

2nd where's his pride as a demigod? ( even if he didn't know he was a demigod. Also he should have some Dragons pride on top of that from Ddraig. Allowing himself to be a slave for a Harem means he has absolutely no pride in himself to get a harem without outside help. )

3rd why would his godly parent bring him where he could become a slave to devils? That's just a garbage setup.

Sigh another failure to find something to read that doesn't just try to blow smoke up my ass.

Also that first sentence of the chapter put a , after you write Rias ( like this [ Rias, ] My mind went blank when I saw Rias tea I was like is there tea called rias tea? )

Nice chapter

Also there was no way to tell that it is draig or they would have known from the beginning when they thought it was a twice critical(just pointing out plot holes)

Well that was weird rias was way more desperate in the manga/anime in the sense she just let him die against raynare and he can’t decline but this works too ig

Awesome update. Looking forward to reading more.

Well done my friend. A solid chapter and a bunch of fun is clearly on the way. Can't wait for the next one

Really hoping for Koneko lemon next update. Looking forward to reading more. Awesome update.

A nice start and long overdue

Wow this is quite bland like water. The hell, the characters has no emotions. Reading this feels robotic, like the characters are just "stating" things not actually "saying" it. There is no soul in the characters. Honestly, you should read more fanfics or other stories and learn from them, try to imitate the way their characters act, the way they make the chracters feel alive.

Awesome update

nice chapter and a good read. If you need name ideas i can help you with that just PM me

1) you might want to find a beta reader
2) I know this is fanfiction, but Twilight Healing, however, can only heal injuries and is incapable of regenerating amputated limbs, reducing exhaustion, or curing sicknesses (got that tight off the DxD wiki)
3) other than all that it's good

Awesome update. Looking forward to reading more.

Some fun little setup. I can't wait to see what you do next