Your writing is cringy with the dialogue being cliche at best

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

Ughh Boruto fkin really i hate that name

Let Boruto save Asia

I enjoy your story alot, but I do think you could slow down a little. It just seems a little fast paced. Other than that I like the story alot.

A small peerage that isn't harem filler? You sir have earned my respect!

God, please don't pair asia with boruto. There is enough harems in dxd to go around. Ravel is just fine, and if by some chance it unfortunately turns into a harem then koneko not asia since i could see boruto being the bridge to reunite koneko with kuroka. Or don't listen to me and you whatever you want, it's your story which is good so far. My only complaint right now is that the characters seem to forget that boruto is also the son of leviathan, i understand that naruto is way stronger than serafall but i think mentioning both of his parents will be better in the long run considering his mom is a satan. I am glad that both naruto and serafall got to appear for a little bit but i hope to see a lot more of them in future chapters especially serafall because she won't be around a lot because of her satan duties. I also think kaguya, if she ever gets out of her prison, shouldn't be naruto's queen or not right away if you do decide to make her his queen. I think having another being that on par with great red, ophis, and naruto but is also a villain will be great for the story. Having naruto be on par with ophis and great red while having no one to make him fight seriously is boring, hell you can have kaguya fight great red or ophis and i definitely wouldn't complain. But those are just my thoughts on the story so far and i think you're doing a good job. Please update soon.

You really tried your hardest to take every cliche in the fucking book and cram it into as little a space as possible... What a failure you are.

This is trash,

Dude are you seriously about to make James Logan AKA Wolverine into one of Naruto's peerage members XD

thug life author, its really good, i liked the story

its naruto-tan not chan

Your story is good but it's hard understand some parts because of ur english. Please if u can find a beta.

I really feel that the part where Issei pronounces the sentence to ask Raynare to react is totally forced! only he is a pervert in the anime!
Why Issei pronounces this sentence while Raynare barely lets him react!

Boruto x Asia? No! let Issei x Asia together please!
why Naruto fans ruin each and every pairing of the protagonist with their fucking harem garbage! -_-
do you like a pairing? Well no, the girl must join the harem of Naruto or in this case Boruto's harem!
it's sucks! :s

nice chapter thx for writing it