Reviews for The Chosen Huntress
AncientUrn chapter 3 . 3/16
So, I found some fan art of Lara and Wonder Woman on Pintrest and decided "I need fanfiction".
BOOM. Here I am. And here is this marvel that is my first Lara x Diana fic, that is sadly, incomplete. I forget to check the dates of publishing and updating quite often. This was incredible. Your writing is elegant and clear. I loved this!
I hope you finish this some day.
Thank you!
Guest chapter 3 . 3/9
I love
c0nfu5ed-m1nd chapter 3 . 3/4
where are you? please keep writing!
Guest chapter 3 . 9/9/2019
please update
Face Yourself chapter 2 . 8/18/2019
The transitions are messy and undefined, it's unclear which characters are in which scene and when they enter or leave (especially in previous chapter), as well as who is talking sometimes. And most of all, all this "Ho?" and "Ho no" is weird and looks... dumb. Nobody talks like that. Oh is a common word, ho is something never used that way by anyone, ever.
RingwraithYJLOVER chapter 3 . 6/25/2019
Diana: *tries to explain, misguidedly thinks Lara is reacting. This Way because she’s scared*

Lara is not. Lara is out of fucks to give. Lara is taking the Nope Train to Fuckthisville.

Lara: I’m retired!

Diana: You’re not even thirty!

Lara: *stuffing cotton into her ears* What? I can’t hear you! The blast deafened me!

I am all here for Tired Done Lara wanting to avoid the supernatural but it just won’t leave her alone and now she has a literal Amazon following her around.

She never should’ve left the Manor.
Henri9897 chapter 3 . 4/27/2019
That's intense, I love it, when will we get the next update ?
Guest chapter 3 . 2/28/2019
please update soon
Guest chapter 3 . 1/28/2019
please update
SupergodzillaSailorCosmos chapter 3 . 1/25/2019
Oh man, that's right but right.
Your story Soziel to Shadow of the Tomb Raider, but where at the DCEU? Before Justice League or after? I know that some say he plays in the winter of 2016, but I say he will play in the winter of 2017.
And are there any other figures in the DCEU?

Please continue writing quickly. I have to know how to go on.

With kind regards SupergodzillaSailorCosmos
SupergodzillaSailorCosmos chapter 2 . 1/25/2019
REALLY HORNY HISTORY.

I'm a fan of DC Extended Universe and the three new Tomb Raider games and your story is really awesome.

I'm very curious how the two will react when they learn more about each other and whether Trinity does not want to interfere with the cause with the gods.

Please continue writing quickly. I have to know how to go on.

With kind regards SupergodzillaSailorCosmos
TacoKing23 chapter 3 . 12/14/2018
Sadly Lara, you are probably wrong about that.

It was cool to see our first bit of action here, and the scene was well-written and as visceral as one would expect such a fight to be.

I'm sort of confused as to why Diana was so evasive during their conversation before the fight, though. I can think of some excuses for her, but they're all just that: excuses. Communication is key, princess.
Guest chapter 3 . 12/12/2018
can't wait till the next chapter
Guest chapter 2 . 12/7/2018
please update
roze88 chapter 3 . 12/9/2018
I love this story. Great writing, great development of the characters. Keep going, I'm so excited for the next chapters.
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