seems like a good story, should finish it. hope everything is fine

Can you please finish this story. Maybe another writer can help you with it. I'm just saying...

Please update this story soon.

Please write more of this story soon.

Great Start - Please continue.

Please write more of this story soon.

I really like the way you're making this AU version work with the original canon. Please keep going because we really need to know what happens next. You have the freedom to go in any direction, and there are directions aplenty as well as the inevitible drama. Thanks.

I am hoping that there is more to this than what is here, it started out great

Your concept of the story is good .
Keep it writing .

Waiting for your next update

Well this explained some things but added some new twists to the story.

Will Beckett be mad at Espo for not telling her that he knew who Castle was? Does Demming know him too? Will they work the case together now that Castle is back? I love military Castle. Please don't get rid of Demming yet, let there be a confrontation between him and Castle, maybe a sparring match so Castle can show him how it's done. Oh and have an audience (please)

Does Demming know who Richard Rogers is?

great start

Yep Jack Reacher. I thought that was where you were going with this story. Should be good.

Merry Christmas.