I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!

more?

I’m so excited to read this and hope you update soon!

Queen

It has been an age since the last time I saw your username pop up in my email, but all the while a pleasant surprise. Glad to see you're still around, hope all is well.

-Keshi

Guess who clicked on this as fast as her little fingers could? :)

First of all, don’t worry, it’s okay to disappear for a while, especially for personal needs. I, too, haven’t updated any of my stories since September and most of my readers are probably bored or ticked off at me for leaving them on a cliffhanger. So I know exactly how you feel~ XD

Second of all, I loved this chapter — very nicely done! Your descriptions were on point and I could visualize everything. Also, I like the way you’ve decided to slowly progress throughout Dawn and Hidan’s friendship (or relationship, if they’re going to be paired together again). I really enjoy stories where the boy and girl hate each other at first becaus it provides a lot of time for clear development. I’m also interested about how you decided to keep Tobi as Madara instead of Obito.

I can’t wait for the third chapter to come out. I wish you the best of luck, and stay healthy and get plenty of rest! Thanks for updating!

- Tenshi-chan

yup

Babe, oml, please write more of this, it's already so much better than the first (not that the first was that bad either, considering you were so young). Please continue writing! 3

please moreee ... update plezzz

It's been seven years?! Man time flies by. *sweat drops* Not much of a Naruto fan now but I can't wait to see the changes you've made.

Holy shizzlenuts. You have no freaking idea how fast I clicked on this as soon as I got the email! ;)

Thank you so much for choosing to rewrite this amazing story! The original had me in fits of laughter, so I'm really excited to see how this one plays out!

Your descriptions have also gotten much better, too! I love how you vividly describe their actions, and it makes it much easier to detect the mood and how everybody is feeling. And judging by your summary, it looks like you knocked out Aeroyonna, Alexa, Bryanna, and Keira...but don't worry, I fully respect your decision!

Keep up the great work, Crysta! I'll definitely be keeping track of this story!

May your stars and skies sparkle today!

— Tenshi-chan —