| Reviews for Avalon in Arms |
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   spelledink chapter 8 . 2h Lovely story. A very interesting mix of military tech and magic. I did wonder what happened with Daphne Greengrass, as her family supported the Dark (but maybe not her). Thanks for a fun read! |
| 19Shorty chapter 8 . 7/20 Great story |
| MotekElm chapter 7 . 7/19 good war action, good Brit picking, good historical detail. |
| MotekElm chapter 5 . 7/19 yay for the Harmony |
| MotekElm chapter 2 . 7/19 way too much extraneous detail on exactly what the army, transport, etc consist of. easy to skim while reading, but not if listening to the story, so it impedes enjoyment |
| Guest chapter 8 . 7/11 Well now that was a very nicely told tale! I'd have liked more details but that's just b/c I'm nosy and the plot was well planned and the story was well written. Great job! |
| Guest chapter 4 . 7/11 Poor Kreature. |
| shadewolfedrt chapter 8 . 7/12 Great story and the only other one that has Harry has King of Avalon to my knowledge is not finished the last chapter had Harrys Aunt and her husband and son there and Dudley was dating a girl form there. |
| yaoiaiss chapter 8 . 7/1 Great Story enjoyed every moment of it |
| iowa-tarheel chapter 8 . 6/30 A superb story. Great detailing of the Armed Forces in equipment and personnel. A keen twist to get things going, unique and not seen before. Thanks for a terrific story that will be re-read time and again. |
| The Ghostly Minion chapter 8 . 6/23 Thank you for this splendid story, which I’ve enjoyed immensely. A Favorite I’ll reread. TGM |
| The Ghostly Minion chapter 7 . 6/23 Harry, Hermione and Neville rocked! The death of Princess Di lends a large dollop of reality to this all. TGM |
| The Ghostly Minion chapter 5 . 6/22 Take homes: Voldemort has ‘won’. Dumbledore is dead. What this will mean for getting Ravenclaw’s diadem is unclear. For that matter, getting Nagini could be a problem too. Perhaps the High Elves could help—but the Diadem is as yet unknown as a Horcrux. England and Ireland are on board with accepting Avalonian help. Avalon is gearing up for war. Harry has his friends as aides. Most importantly, Harry and Hermione have declared their mutual love and are a couple. TGM |
| The Ghostly Minion chapter 4 . 6/22 One of the problems with long chapters is that there is so much action. The take homes are that Voldemort has taken over. We know about the Horcruxes and that Harry has one. That Avalon will confer with the British Monarchy. That Hermione at least is seemingly drawing close to Harry. TGM |
| The Ghostly Minion chapter 3 . 6/22 A busy chapter. It’s wonderful that the Grangers, the Lovegoods and the Longbottoms have all come to Avalon. Harry now has friends (and one who will be far more than that) to share his lessons and new counselors to advise him. The plan he set forth to Parlement is audacious and in line with Harry’s “people saving thing”. Hopfully many will take advantage of this. It is such a hoot that Albus keeps just missing Harry! TGM |
