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Actually, I appreciate bite-size chapters. I try to keep my entries below 1,500 words whenever possible. It makes for much more pleasant reading and keeps the narrative direct and clean.

Thanks! rbs

praxix was an exesteial threat to the Klingon speicies

thatmax warp speed is stupid but should have used a slipstream drive or trans warp coils

Thanks for a great story. I hope you do write another one sometime soon.
I agree with you. I enjoy the original Star Trek but I have some real issues with a lot of Roddenberry's ideas, too many to list here.

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Awesome story. Better than any canon version. I'll be looking forward to more.

Yet again, great action. Really enjoying this story.

Awesome action chapter! I'm looking forward to Kirk's mission.

Once again, very well done. You hold the readers interest well.
I would have left the TNG references out but I have a bias against the it and the other new Trek.
I'm looking forward to seeing Kirk's plan unfold.

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Now that's what a dreadnought is supposed to be. Awesome action scenes.
Fun, but strange, to see Kirk and Khan as friends. I like this better than the canon universe though.

Awesome chapter. Great action, can't wait to see the Dreadnought.
And the Federation has discovered the hyperdrive thanks to the augments.
I'll be waiting for more.

Interesting look at the federations new operations. Sounds like an exciting chapter coming up.

You have really come along way with this story and as always, your writing is amazing. I am glad that Khan/Marla ended up together again in this au and ending this chapter with a short scene of them was icing on cake and I hope there will be more of them in this story. Keep up the good work and please hurry-up and update ASAP.

P.S. Maybe you could add in some flashbacks of Khan/Marla before they got married.