Reviews for Snow and Fire Redux
Mend1cant Bias chapter 1 . 9/2/2019
Gotta say. The Dead City mission in Exodus, the city has 5x the radiation compared to Moscow. And telepathic mutants and giant worms are dominant
artem-abramov-2004 chapter 1 . 8/20/2019
Winter x Artem what could be better :))))))
miraimp chapter 2 . 4/9/2019
What the in the name of God is this.
Why do they believe Artyom, if they interrogated him 5 minutes ago and did not trust him. Where is the logic. Compared with previous works, this is weak. But I like the moments where he tries to speak English. Think about it.
Deadly Instinct chapter 1 . 2/3/2019
I'm glad this story was posted, I would have been pretty disappointed if the others had been cancelled and no continuation was posted.

That being said, I don't know what to say about this story.

The plot is nothing like the original first chapter of Snow and Fire, so I can't compare them yet. I'm interested in how you have adjusted the balance of strength between RWBY and Metro. While Ak 47 rounds are pretty powerful, as far as assault rifles go, I was always under the impression that most Remnant arms packed more of a punch. I was involved in a thread that discussed the differences in Dust based ammunition and gun powder based ammunition. We came to the conclusion that Dust rounds transfer far more energy than gun powder but travel far more slowly because of it. That added velocity from Earth rounds could hypothetically cover the gap and penetrate grimm while doing less damage to the area around the point of impact. Sort of like penetration and speed vs versatility and explosiveness.

Anyways...

I have a few questions that will hopefully be answered soon. Why would Winter even want to speak to Artyom? How come none of the other Pollis Rangers tried to follow Artyom? Will Metro Last Light still have a place here since the nest was destroyed? How close are you to releasing the second chapter? It has been more than two months since the previous update. I would have hoped things would have progressed far quicker but I digress.

Thanks for the reading material and stay strong.
Cheeki Breeki.
anonymous412 chapter 1 . 12/10/2018
So far, so good
Guest chapter 1 . 11/19/2018
So instead of Winter coming to Earth first it's Artyom coming to Remnant, ok sure.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/13/2018
is putting start playing this song by this band or song by hans Zimmerman or song lyrics in a story chapter is that Against .Net rules ?

SpyroAndCynderFan48 has song lyrics in a story chapter
Malgrath chapter 1 . 11/13/2018
Can't wait for more.
GunRunners chapter 1 . 11/11/2018
Why not try a Metro/GOT crossover? Perfect scenario, the Sparta order, Nazis, Reds get introduced to old feudal society. There’s the mystical junk w/ visions. Khan vs the red lady in terms of belief.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/9/2018
I wouldn’t say bad, but rather label it “Canon” ending. Still prefer the Anna pairing
Aren serathy chapter 1 . 11/9/2018
“What did I get my self into?”
Famous last words before much hurt.