Reviews for On Tour
jojoDO chapter 120 . 7/3
Oh my god... 120 chapters... Terry spent just worrying, worrying, worrying for his boy. To see them back together again... *collapses in a puddle* OHHH MY GOOOOD. That is such a feeling. God, I want to cry. But how, how in ice cold frozen HELL is Rock ever going to explain this whole adventure to Terry? I mean... *mind blown* jeez. Where to start?! "Oh Athena was a sociopathic bitch, Kensou ran away, Shermie ripped out my girlfriend's eyes and I punched her body to oblivion, Iori murdered Yashiro in a restaurant, we had a gang war, I got stabbed, shot, went into a demonic rage and murdered people etc. etc. etc. etc. etc. etc. etc. etc. etc. etc. et. E T FREAKING C. Whew.

I'm so glad the story ends here, before we ever have to open up that can of worms. My god. Nano, you are beautiful and brilliant and a machine. You've absolutely humbled me with your writing productivity. Kudos to you. And, one last time... congratulations.
jojoDO chapter 119 . 7/3
All those horrid ordeals listed at the end... "Just another day in the life of Yaggo" xD

I'm glad to see them back in good spirits tho. This chapter was a good half Iori/Rock banter and half philosophy of the fascinating boy he has taken under him on this whole crazy adventure. Now he knows what Rock is: the boy's true color shown at that final battle, when he DIDN'T give into Riot, or Geese Blood, or any other homicidal tendencies, and showed that he was a compassionate teenager. What a ducky.

Haaah. I love breathing the air of normal. They probably do too.
jojoDO chapter 118 . 7/3
Jeez Chiz... why you gotta take a kind, life-saving gesture, and turn it so devious? Ugh. Never an honest intention in mind. You give the gal new eyes. "let's dissect her one day". Curry is like her Evil Number Two. They probably stroke matching cats.

Such ruthless people provide medical assistance to the world haha.
jojoDO chapter 117 . 7/3
No way... BETTY?! HA! BLANCTORCHE EX MACHINA! HOLY SHIITAKE!

Shen Woo man, you lucked out. He's totally mishandling this situation tho: you're supposed to be grateful someone saves your life, not aggressive! Sheesh man, take a chill pill.

Now what does Elisabeth have against Iori? Hmmmmmmmmm...?
jojoDO chapter 116 . 7/3
The ship is sunk indeed. Man... this is supposed to be a moving forward chapter, but I can't help but feel like this is sorta a stall: Kensou is trying to learn how to be without her, but Athena is trying to CHANGE. What would he do if he knew she was trying to change? Maybe I'm looking at this wrong.

In any case, time needs to seriously heal these two. It's gonna take time... nothing but time. Best of luck to both of em.
jojoDO chapter 115 . 7/3
Dang... kinda bittersweet here. I didn't expect Iori to be that CRUEL to his own clansman. Er... woman. Wow. I'm not sure how i feel about him being so dismissive of it all... hmm.

So ol' Yew made it out eh? I guess he has Rock to thank for that. Rock showed him mercy, and in turn he gets to have a new life with his family. Violence begets violence, peace begets peace. This makes me happy Rock made the choice he did.
jojoDO chapter 114 . 7/3
*Sigh of relief* OH THANK GOD. Whippy is BACK! Ahhh thanks you Nano. Thank you for not scarring that poor girl for life. Rock cared about her so much, and he did a lot to help her out. He put his butt in the fire to get her those new eyes... god it feels good to have it pay off. And I'm so glad they're on a pleasant basis. When they started talking about seeing each other again.. SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEe

I'm so so so happy. Whip is okay. YEEE.
jojoDO chapter 113 . 7/3
Man... now THIS is a good feeling. Everything peaceful, the sky blue, birds singing, all that nonsense. I feel like I need a rest as much as the people in this story, because I too have gone on this journey of blood and gore, betrayal, deception, beliefs tested... whew. I can't imagine how YOU must feel nano. Before I move on to the epilogue, I want to congratulate you on getting to the end of this beast. This is surely your crowning achievement of writing, and I hope you feel utterly satisfied at the end of it.

Without further ado... let's see how everyone else moves on from this craziness.
jojoDO chapter 112 . 7/3
Wow. What an ending to the climax. GG DUCKYYYYY! He played the ol "violence begets violence" card, and put an end to this madness by sparing their lives. Hopefully they're not as stupid as the Albanians from "Taken" and try to bite the hand that feeds em. They just had the luckiest day of their lives. They need to go home, kiss their kids if they have em, make love to their wives if they have em. And don't ever fuck with Iori and his peeps again xD

GG Ducky. Turn the other cheek, fam.
jojoDO chapter 111 . 7/3
Man, this is all happening so fast... I can't quite grasp what's going on here. So it looks like Rock chose to fight back, but he chose NOT to lose himself to his power... he used a fleck of it. But it looks like it wasn't enough to stave off ten guys with knives, because he got turned into a pincushion... GAAAAh. So he gets to keep his peace of mind, but he could lose his LIFE... major gray area here. Not sure what the right choice should have been.

in any case, was that an Iori ex machina at the end? Did he seriously roll up on Cheng and drop his fat ass? No way. xD
jojoDO chapter 110 . 7/3
Basically a continuation of the ultimatum from last chap, except this time it's solved: HOLD THE LINE. Those were the truest words ever spoken. That means, even if he has to lose himself, even if he has to do something disgusting and gruesome... what matter is the purpose for it. Survival. To live. He's defending himself, so he can go back to a simpler time, a peaceful time.

Too bad the guards can't use guns tho lol. THEY ARE FUUUUUCKED xD
jojoDO chapter 109 . 7/3
Man... that's rough. Looks like Rock's been double crossed. And now he has an ultimatum again... to fight for his life, his survival, does he lose himself again? To get back to his life, to the people he loves, he has to become something horrible again... painful stuff. I guess we'll see.
jojoDO chapter 108 . 7/3
...Wow. He lost. Damn. That was fast. 2 minutes LOL. Just goes to show Iori has few equals. Even a methed out punchy dude like Shen aint got the stuff to hang with the Sacred Treasures.

...WTF THO. HE'S GONE! WAT HAPPEN. I thought you were gonna kill Shen, yeah xD jeez
jojoDO chapter 107 . 7/3
O_ O JESUS CHRIST NANO!

Shen Woo gore porn. I can tell you totally fell in love with this character and made him a welcome addition of nanoverse. Great. Another character turned into a sociopathic violent freak LOL. Luv you nano.

Iori's gonna have a time on his hands with this crazed beast.
jojoDO chapter 106 . 7/3
Oh man, this is shaping up to be a bloody battle. So Shen Woo just beat people to death? Scary AF.

So the battle is really just a diversion for Yew. His first and foremost target is Rock... though losing Iori would definitely be an added bonus for him.

Seriously tho, this is gonna be LIT! I can't wait to see this unfold, because this must be the Final Battle o _ o
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