Hellooooo?
Seone here?
Next chapter? ... I Guess no.

Oh man, drama! I'm looking forward to the future chapters!

Damn! Sorry this came so late. But my God! Shredder is BURTAL. "Oh yes, lets go get Shredder's daughter back, you know, AFTER he proved that he is a "positive mentor". And what's the worst that can happen?" Hmm... how about... everything goes to hell? So a few notes. I really like where you're going with this. It definitely has a better background than it's former story. I like how Miwa and Leo already somewhat knew each other vs the first story where they hadn't even met. So their relationship (I mean like the way they interact relationship) will probably play a role in this. I also like how the turtles are a lot more at each others throats because forming a team is not easy (like you said.) Hmmm... maybe put them through Karai's Fourtold trap rooms... it should work. Team bonding yay. Jk. Anyway I would like to guess that this plot is going to be a lot more thicker than what the first one was. So far, I can guess that it's going to be a mix of the turtles becoming a team and what happens to Miwa after she gets kidnapped. I wanna go out on a limb and say maybe they won't stay evil for the whole thing. But I do think a good majority will be spent on character development and the movement of the Foot plot you are currently on. Overall I really love it. I can't wait till the next update.

I didn't think you'd respond to my message but yeah I really enjoyed your last one really I enjoy any fanfiction with Karai and Splinter bonding chapters they are just so cute together I like father-daughter bonding stuff. I'm glad I gave you some ideas

I loved the past one and I love this one thought my one complaint with the previous sotry is that there wasnt enough Splinter and Karai interaction I felt it was too much tmnt footclan kidnap stuff. Could you in this story do a few chapters before karai gets kidnapped focusing on Splinters and Karais relationship? Like training and karai rebelling and hugs stuff like that it would also be cute to see Karais younger years

Damn. This was awesome. I'm so glad you updated quickly. Because the suspense of what this would be was killing me. I love it though. And I have a guess or two as to what is gonna happen, but Imma write it down and not say it aloud incase I do end up being right and spoiling it for anyone who reads the reviews. But keep up the great work!
Characters, Imma just say, Leo is definitely stone cold. And the way each of them are portrayed, to me, it seems like the best way to have them work together. Being in complete unity is so boring at times, but picking fights and testing limits for a team like this, I think is the right way to do it. Because right now, they're more like four individuals.
Individuals make a group. A group that can work together is a team. But a team that trust each other is a family.
That's just my main philosophy on that. I am already theorizing the plot and stuff just based off this one chapter. Super excited for next week!

Wow the plot seems really interesting and i can't wait for the next chapter!btw I wish you good start with the story

Amazing chapter I really loved it and I can't wait to read the next one!