Yay! This was so good! Thanks so much! Anyway, now onto an actual review! Seriously, I'm SO glad you had everyone stand up to Pamela like that. I hated that scene in the game, where the second Pamela plays the victim when Vayne tells her in the nicest way possible what she did was wrong, everyone gangs up on him instead of her. Kinda makes me think he's the Charlie Brown of the Mana Khemia universe. THIS is how that scene should have gone from the start! I also loved the little references to various parts of the game you sprinkled in: the library monster, Jessica's illness, Roxis fainting from Pamela's concoction...they were all great! Oh, and the part about Muppy asking Pamela for the recipe was cute as well. I can totally see him doing that. Alright, that takes care of that! I love this! Thank you so much for writing this!