When I'm crying by the end of a fic I know it's pretty amazing. This was so beautifully written. Gosh I wish the episode had ended like this, given us just a little more. I especially loved the bits about Brock. I'm hoping we can get more insight into his life next season. Oh and of course the big brothers looking out for their littlest brother is just the best. Thanks so much for this read :)

Thank you for this. Great story, great writing. Please, keep them coming

That episode had me in laughter-when Clay opens his eyes and smiles then in tears after Adam. Thanks for sharing this.

Thanks so much for exploring the missing moments from this ep. Great writing!

Great expansion on this storyline! You filled in a huge gap we needed filled!

Really wonderfull story, built up very nicely. Glad you shared this!

Really well done. Very cool to see you follow the episode at first, while adding more details/ thoughts etc. and then expand on that with a look into what happened after that. Loved the emotional breakdowns too. Great job.

Nice job expanding on this episode. Giving some extra details in the first chapter and then adding a whole new part in the second. It was really good.

I have really enjoyed reading this little fic. Loved all the emotions in this and I'm looking forward to reading more from you!

And there come the tears again! I cried all the way through this episode and my gosh this brought it all back. So beautifully written, the characters emotions and personalities written perfectly! I aspire to be able to write with as much raw emotion as this! such an incredible job

such a great follow-up to an amazing episode! I love how you stuck to the original script but also made it your own! Can't wait to read more!

This may have been short, but so very enjoyable. Loved every part. Great concept and writing style. Hope there'll be a new fic soon.

This was really good! I'm already excited for your next story.

Lots and lots of emotions in this. Wonderfully done! You should really do more fics like this.

Emotional stuff! Well written. Thank you for sharing.