Well that's what I call a romantic Halloween night!

Also buddy, no offense, but I feel like you should have broken this up into like three or four chapters, like I felt like this would have been better with cliffhangers, like when the gasoline can went rolling down or just before Blu attacked Tulio in his costume, or even when the gang saw the fire, plus the length wouldn't put people to sleep or get bored reading.

Wow this chapter was freaking looooong and freaking awesome.
Man this was so awesome, I can't believe it, I had a blast reading this one, it is nice and long.
And actually in the beginning I thought that story was real, but nope it was Blu telling the story you actually succed on tricking me, you decepticon !
Either way it was good and yes yey yes Blu can fly now that is soooo great !
Finally ! Now Blu can become the predator and Jewel will be his prey. YEESSS
I can see the effort put in this chapter, everything was smooth and there wore no mistakes.
It was clean and everything was great ! I can't wait to see the next chapter.
So keep up the good work, keep what you are doing, I'll be here to support you.
Happy Halloween...although I don't celebrate it. And be safe.. till all are one, my old friend.